Reviews for Frostbitten
oblivionrain chapter 12 . 11/1/2016
What I think are mistakes-
First. Sunlight? I thought that 1. it's night... 2. it's snowing for goodness sakes!
Second. Leaning a wall, forcing his eye open a slit?Is it just me who thinks that you've missed a few words there, friend?

DONE! WOOOOOOO
shadowkat678 chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
You know, I have not a clue why you say these are so bad, because they're amazing! Characterization is spot on, it's simple yet descriptive (something I struggle at. Wish I would do those light, simple tones.) and dang the plot is great too!
HaveACuppaT chapter 14 . 9/15/2013
Aww that was really cool XD
SerenityPendragon chapter 14 . 8/23/2013
Yay! Another great story! I'm glad arthur lived. Well on to the sequel! :D
SerenityPendragon chapter 13 . 8/23/2013
...O_o...
SerenityPendragon chapter 11 . 8/23/2013
Ahh! Don't hurt Arthur! :(
SerenityPendragon chapter 6 . 8/23/2013
Awww I hate cliffies...thank god the story's finished xD Nooooo I hope Lancelot doesn't die :(
Book girl fan chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
Why do I get the feeling Galahad is going to be (to use the Trekkie term) a redshirt?
gatemadness chapter 14 . 2/3/2013
Yeah I just wanted to tell you this is a AWSOME story, well this and the knight's mare. Just couldnt stop reading!

Toodles! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 11/22/2012
The torch and map were very clever. Applause.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
This is exciting.
FarmersDaughter chapter 10 . 11/13/2012
*mouth drops open* wow.
FarmersDaughter chapter 9 . 11/13/2012
Bad feather! I think...
FarmersDaughter chapter 8 . 11/13/2012
Spooookyyyyy...
FarmersDaughter chapter 7 . 11/13/2012
Man you're good at cliffies! So wouldn't Arthur know that Merlin has magic?
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