|Reviews for A Fire Stirring|
| Laylay chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
I think this story is great a story like this needs more reviews
| lasafam chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Lovely~! Always wonderful to see love for these two I did love reading about the things Vaughn liked about Sabrina, for being quiet and considerate of him. Vaughn was perfectly in character, and I did like how he thought of Chelsea as an annoyance. And I have to say I really liked Mark in this too.
Did notice some spelling errors.
For example, "the life of the owner of the farmer" confused me for a bit.
"...the learned to like her quiet, shy manner", I assume you mean "he" instead of "the".
And also, "...with a chuckled."
Apologies for nitpicking, I just get that way when it comes to spelling and grammar.