Reviews for New Familiarities
2000Aerobars chapter 13 . 1/16
Wait. What?! Oh boy, I didn't expect that. You must update! Don't leave me hanging!
2000Aerobars chapter 12 . 1/7
Wait, what?! I am going line up every character in this chapter and slap them. The League was so close! This fog is confusing everyone I think, still. Very good. The scene was a little confusing in places, but overall, very well done.
2000Aerobars chapter 11 . 1/7
Hmm, that's creepy, cute and mysterious all at once. I'm personally not for that couple, but it's written very very well as the same. I'm curious to see how this all works out
2000Aerobars chapter 10 . 1/7
Awww bless him. That's quite a short, but nice chapter. You keep giving us little chunks every now and then. Very cleverly done, can't wait to read the rest
2000Aerobars chapter 9 . 1/7
Hmm, so thats what was going on. What is this other group after, you're very good at keeping secrets in a way in which we feel like we have to keep reading. Nice one
2000Aerobars chapter 8 . 1/6
Uh huh, nice action scene there. Now I just want to give the League a big hug. As usual, you captured each characters personality very well. I think a bullet would probably need a bit more care than you added. But you've still done very well
2000Aerobars chapter 7 . 1/6
Uh oh, here's trouble. Can't wait to read more. Everyone is more or less in character and the new group is quite extraordinary
2000Aerobars chapter 6 . 1/6
Poor Nemo... that story gets me every time come to think of it. That ending paragraph was a bit mad lol, I like mad, so great job. I'm curious as to why this is happening, but I have an idea in mind about this other group
2000Aerobars chapter 5 . 1/6
Oh well, not Robur, but equally good. That action scene was awesome. But I thought Mina would heal straight away, or did she? I hae a habit of missing put random lines. That but with the locket really caught me, that part was written beautifully...
2000Aerobars chapter 4 . 1/6
Sun. .. that's Robur the Conquerer's mark... The way you pieced this chapter together is excellent.I' m curious to read the rest
2000Aerobars chapter 3 . 1/6
Hmm, this is mysterious. I'm curious to see more. You have captured Skinner wonderfully nice work
2000Aerobars chapter 2 . 1/6
Apologies for the weird end to the first review. Autocorrect got me. I'm surprised to see those two together, but the description of the characters and how Jekyll spoke to He was perfect. Nice )
2000Aerobars chapter 1 . 1/6
Usually I hate present tense writing, but I think you did pretty well. You have all of the imagery there and I like how we don't know who the characters are. Is it the Mysterious Men by any chance? That's my guess ' but anyway, great job, and weplease done :)
Tacodestroyeravenger chapter 13 . 9/14/2015
I'm curious as to where Jekyll went.
Guest chapter 12 . 3/28/2013
Good story so far
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