|Reviews for Hearts In Sync|
| readingKs chapter 18 . 8/17
I could have sworn that you were going to say "SUPRISE, its not really the flu! She's pregnant!"
Glad you didn't because this is a great ending, and they are too young for a baby.
Wasn't super happy that Paul re-imprinted on someone else, but at least it was broken.
Bella's co-dependence here (taking her life because Paul left her?) was very concerning.
| readingKs chapter 7 . 8/17
Yay! He loves her!
| readingKs chapter 6 . 8/17
This story is so interesting, but its a tad creepy that Bella talks like she's a shy 3 year old
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/28
i totally hate Bella because she's acting like she should be put into a mental hospital. All catatonic and lame. Jesus christ get a load of yourself leach lover. I really wish she wasn't so stupid all the time.
| The Ice Goddess chapter 18 . 7/21
Awww! Sweet! I just wanted to let you know I posted a review of your story on Tumblr under "the-ice-goddess". I'll tag you if you have a known blog!
| awesomeami316 chapter 18 . 7/18
This was perfect!
| andrewpine chapter 5 . 5/7
They didn't imprint,but he will down the road and break her heart once again.
| jahkarahlyoung chapter 7 . 3/23
I though Emily was visiting her family?
| MoonFragrance chapter 16 . 2/11
Interesting take on Paul's imprint. His reunion with Bella was heartfelt and lovely.
| MoonFragrance chapter 18 . 2/11
Lovely ending to an adorable telling.
| MoonFragrance chapter 15 . 2/10
Giving up just like that? Come on, Bella! She's gotta know she's better than that.
| MoonFragrance chapter 6 . 2/8
This chapter had my heart fluttering.
| MoonFragrance chapter 5 . 2/8
Bella's in the know. And so it begins.
| MoonFragrance chapter 4 . 2/8
Oh, snap, I forgot about Bella not knowing about the wolf pack yet. Paul is perceptive and has the sort of depth those around him might not immediately expect. Things are developing nicely.
| B4bidden Products chapter 18 . 2/8
wish for more to read absolutely love this story