Reviews for Hearts In Sync |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please add more chapters to this book would love to see what happens with Bella and Paul |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like they will help each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aside from that vicious twist that was thrown in, I thoroughly enjoyed this! Now I gotta find the sequel. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() A dick hitting the clit in the right spot when she's wearing jeans? It's not even pants, it's jeans... Gotta love unrealistic smut |
![]() ![]() I’ve already read this so many times but every time I read this chapter it never falls to make me ball my eyes out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah see sams explanation of Rachel being the perfect mate for Paul would piss me off if she was so perfect the wolf would accept her. If the wolf accepted and recognised Bella as its mate then there would be no need for imprinting so the imprint wouldn't happen. I'd be super pissed that my boyfriend who claims I'm his chosen mate spent a whole week with another woman |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohh wow this was really good. For a minute there I thought maybe Bella was pregnant towards the end there. Ok going to read the sequel. |
![]() ![]() Good Soup |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok the ending was fine it was happy but the imprint drama was just so unnecessary, it could have been written out and changed to maybe having some lingering feelings for her like some residual feeling of wanting to know her but completely pales in comparison to the soul bond Paul & Bella have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WTF IS THIS BS. How can you make him imprint when BOTH he and his wolf feel the imprint-like bond to Bella it makes no sense if he felt that bond then he wouldn't be able to imprint, the only reason I'm going to keep reading is for the ending but this just smells of dumb drama put in for no reason then to create drama. |
![]() ![]() I’m just so uncomfortable with the last several chapters. Bella has once again proved herself an unstable basket case. Paul has tied himself to a girl whose go-to response to difficulty in her life is suicide, first by starvation, second by throwing herself off a cliff. Probably without meaning to, the author of this story has romanticized suicide attempts. As long as Paul stays with Bella, she is casually “fixed”, and there is no true effort toward Bella getting the help she obviously needs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a little cheesy but I love it anyways |
![]() ![]() Embry phase? |
![]() ![]() I think Emmett would be livid at what Edward did to Bella |