Reviews for Hearts In Sync
lemonbutt chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Sam and Emily are so cute it's gross. hahah.
Augustmoon99 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Yay! So happy that this is finally making it out. Wonderful as ever, even after reading it again. Still makes me smile and sigh and frown. Doing a great job at bringing out the emotions of Sam and showing how other people are seeing Bella while she is in the 'zombie state'. Fantastic! Looking forward to reading the next one...again. :)
twimama77 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Very awesome
edger2deadly chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
From wat i read it's a good story. Can't wait for the next chap then
jacob black rulez chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
oh wow sounds great so far
Vane3131 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Great start. I really do love Sam. I can't wait for the next chapter in HIS
VVw11 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Really good..I'm glad to see this version of bellas zombie days...i really enjoy paul/bella pairings..can't wait for more..
Riley MacGyver523 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Awesome start I can't wait to see what happens next please update again soon.
Mrs. Jim chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Hmm this seems interesting already. This is already very different what with Sam and Jake watching over her during her zombie time. Can't wait to see where you go with this
Jeri252 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
love it
Veronique24 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Looks very promissing! Can't wait to read more.
PaulIsaHAwttie chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
great start! Cant wait to read more!
Princess Mishawaka chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Oh I love it. Bella is so pathetic and as a reader I want to grab hold of her through the computer and shake her. Get up girl no man is worth this. But I've been left behind too and I can see how that could happen to her.

I think Sam and Emily would do the world of good for her. Just getting her out of that bedroom and away from that window.

Very good writing. I can't wait for the next chapter. Joan
Eat Me Alive Or Dead chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
0_o I love it! want to read next chapter, UPDATE ASAP
ladyMiraculousNight chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
I think it's awesome and I think I can't wait for more so u must please update soon :) till next time
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