|Reviews for On The Immutability of Fate|
| TheGreenElephant911 chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
I like it, as unfortunate the situation is. Zeus/Jupiter and Hera/Juno working together? Never thought of it like that. Nice and short. It gives one enough room to think. Thanks :)
| me malum chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
I love how you kept the writing in style with the original, with the titles and the direct address at the start.
And there were lines in here that made me shiver; Jupiter's description of their marriage, and then his memory of Juno in brackets. The gods as personalities aren't explored to my satisfaction in the Aeneid, and I feel you've captured a bit more of the two of them here.
Going to re-read now- I love this. And if you ever have time for your grand plan, I'll eagerly read that as well.