Reviews for Uncontrollable
cavemenftw chapter 5 . 1/14/2012
went in expecting smut, but ended up with a really good and surprisingly touching story.

Well done.
spike'smate chapter 5 . 12/24/2011
hot smutty story LOVED IT great job
MMWillow13 chapter 5 . 12/17/2011
Thank you! This story touches on several points that I've always felt the show didn't do justice to. The first and most important being with Spike/William's humanity so close to the surface in everything even before he got a soul, there just seemed to be no way that his character would force a woman sexually even with a demon it just goes against his character, but it did seem very in keeping with the Angelus character and even Liam before he was turned. The other point being while Angelus, Riley and even Angel to some extent were clearly unfaithful characters at least when it came to women, Spike doesn't read that way. Riley and his lack of guilt or empathy over the whole Faith mess as well as the vampire tramps not to mention the shows version of the lust house really prepped the reaction you wrote, bravo! Love the broken jaw bit and the whole Spike asking permission and trying to make it pleasant for both of them! The Ripper bit when Giles addressed Riley was good although I kinda wish he had boxed his ears in after Buffy told them how Riley had reacted after they left, but hey maybe in the next story.
Sweet-T3 chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
WOW! This story was awesome! This would have been a much better script for the televised episode, than the actual Joss version! So many points made me laugh out loud, people on the train thought I was a loon! I know some dialogue was from the show, but, lady u nailed the characters in a familiar setting but made it all new and all yours! BRAVA!
camnz chapter 5 . 11/18/2011
Very good. I like how they stayed in character even as they were obviously changing.
LithiumReaper chapter 5 . 11/18/2011
Oh my word! I wanna kill Riley! He's such a dick. I'm sOoOo glad that Buffy punched the shit out of him! And the last Spuffy-ness? Super cute.. The cute little compliments, giggles and such.. Totally adorable sweets. You're mondo awesome! :D
LithiumReaper chapter 4 . 11/18/2011
This was an action packed chapter! And so so so good! Anya and Xander were cute. And Giles, Tara and Willow trying to bind the horny ones.. Good! Willow's "You're pissing them off" was just legendary! Hehe now, on to the last chapter! :D can't wait
LithiumReaper chapter 3 . 11/18/2011
Okay, first off, that Holt woman is fucking crackers! Secondly, I know I'm supposed to feel bad that Riley is being cheated on, but I can't bring myself to feel bad though.. The Spuffy is toe-curling, mind-numbingly hot! Phewy! Good chapter. Loved it.. And between you and me, the noises Tara and Willow heard, sooo funny. Could imagine their faces and everything :D hehe
LithiumReaper chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
Of ff has been hating me! Ahem, moving on. Amazing chapter! Giles sounded mighty hot hehe and the Spuffy-ness.. Lawdy! Love it! Yup, muse gal is back, and kicking reviewing ass :P
LithiumReaper chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
This looks really cool! I love Spike in this chapter. He's like a slinky, yet he simply does what Buffy asks of him, which is oddly cute. Even if she's being a bitch. The horny staring bit was funny as hell hehe. So sweets, a good chapter, as always!
tomoe-gozen52 chapter 5 . 11/5/2011
I don't usually read Buffy stories, but this was damn good. You are deft at capturing the rhythm of their speech and pacing. Enjoyed this very much.
Sirius120 chapter 5 . 10/24/2011
Another great Spuffy story! Keep writing, I love your work :-)
heartsewnsleeve chapter 5 . 10/24/2011
I loved this story! The plot was so intense, and the ending was perfect! *gives cupcake*
Vera Snape-Evans chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
Much delicious wonderfulness. They turned something with extreme emotional trauma potential and turned it into something amazingly good.
Vera Snape-Evans chapter 3 . 10/23/2011
Oh yeah. I think Spike definitely earned smug...as did Buffy. They're going to have a great deal of trouble shaking these memories.
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