|Reviews for Kaleidoscope: Prismatic Edition|
| Storylover Vodhr- Dux Ducis chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Interesting. I shall keep a eye on this story.
| Fox-Sama chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Wow. This is different. but if I may use words that Scootaloo once used. "I'm liking this idea."
your off to a great start. Dash loves twi, but had a fling with AJ. Aj seems to think nothing of it at all, while dash thought it mad them closer. first chapter and you already of a lot of drama, Nice work!
| Tortured Artist chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
While I will admit this version seems much more well written than your older version, I am confused as to why you felt the need to just make a whole new story. If this is a re-imagining of the first story, shouldn't you finish "Kaleidoscope" before writing a re-imagining? If this is suppose to be an improved version of "Kaleidoscope," then why not replace the chapters in the story you already have? If you believe this is the best thing for your story, I support you. It's just that I would like some sort of explanation of your intentions in an author's note or something.