Reviews for On the Curb Outside
Sami chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
Not bad. ;)
orionastro chapter 1 . 5/2/2012
beautifull, this should not have ended, the story should continue to see their relationship growing and evolving, living togheter and married, with kids etc... forever in love.
Mus4u chapter 1 . 2/6/2012
Even with the super sweet cliches this was a great read.
CC chapter 1 . 12/22/2011
I enjoyed the story and was really glad to see it as there is way not enough fiction in this fandom. I thought you captured the cliches well and the way you used the rain took it beyond cliche. I must admit I think that Bo was a bit OOC with as much crying as he did, but it fit in with your theme. I think the only critique I had is that your Jimmy voice is a bit off. Otherwise, nice effort; thanks. Sorry your site shut down before you saw if you won.
Ashley chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Loved it! I really like how you wrote everything out and had details and descriptions. :-) Your grammar and spelling- yet another plus for this story!
Peya Luna chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
nice! i like the mental picture of bo sitting in the rain crying.