Reviews for Unexpected |
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PrincessCarly28 chapter 17 . 8/24/2014 oh nu |
PrincessCarly28 chapter 15 . 8/24/2014 *whistles suggestively* |
PrincessCarly28 chapter 13 . 8/24/2014 squee |
PrincessCarly28 chapter 12 . 8/24/2014 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
PrincessCarly28 chapter 9 . 8/23/2014 goddammit nyeh GODDAMMIT SPIDERBITCH GOGDAMMIT ALL |
PrincessCarly28 chapter 8 . 8/23/2014 ouoOUO OUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
PrincessCarly28 chapter 7 . 8/23/2014 Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. AND YUS. PBJ |
PrincessCarly28 chapter 2 . 8/23/2014 DAWWWWWWWWWWWWW O/O |
Darklink-link753 chapter 21 . 4/28/2014 Whatever's going on I hope it gets better. And I can't wait for the next update :o) Good luck |
thunderwave chapter 21 . 4/16/2014 NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! *sniffle sniffle* I get home from school and finish ch. 20 only to be attacked by a lacking of ch. 21... but omg! that was an amazing fanfic! JohnKat furever! |
estrangedShipper chapter 21 . 10/12/2013 augh i hope you'll update eventually i look forward to when you do update |
RandomAnonymous chapter 20 . 8/9/2013 THIS IS REALLY GOOD! One thing though- you keep referring to the kids as "the kids", which is just fine but it would be nice if you could make it clear how old they're supposed to were 13 when the game started, and now I THINK they are 16 canonically and the game isnt over yet. This is post-game right? If they end the game at16, (and you wrote of at least 3 years passing in the fic) then aren't they 19 now? Related to that- would you write a birthday scene? Just for some fluffy filler. You dont have to but it would be sweet. |
Guest chapter 16 . 8/9/2013 I like reading your story. |
RandomAnonymous chapter 14 . 8/9/2013 By the way, your link: the account has been deactivated. |
RandomAnonymous chapter 12 . 8/9/2013 Wait... Karkat has hemophobia AND homophobia, or was that just a typo? |