|Reviews for Halogen|
| Angel Heart chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
"At least there won't be dents."
That was probably the funniest point.
| Jazz's lil ninja chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Amazing story xx keep it up
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
SO CUTE! AAAAAAA! *spasms* YAY! *throws chess piece* huzzah! A use for chess pieces has been found! XD
(no offense to chess players)
| MoonWallker chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
Aww so sweet!
| Daklog73 chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
This was totally cute! Jazz and Prowl are my favs to read about and I just loved seeing the playful side of Optimus! It's not written often enough.
| Shizuka Taiyou chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Total sweetness. I was woundering when you'd get me hooked onto one of your fics again. And it's another PxJ fic. My favorite pairing.
Also if you'd like to check out my Writing Challange forums and my TF topics and see challanges you like to try out there for inspiriation feel free to use them. Or to post your own.
| Anodythe chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
This gives the move, "Knight to Kings level three", a whole new meaning!
| Native Knight chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
OMG YES! Epic win. Going straight into my favorites :D
| Creative Lunatic chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Lol, this is excellent! Would you mind if I were to use the 'Jazz challenged my aim' line? I'll give credit
| Maiden of the Heavens chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Awesome one-shot! :D
| Darkeyes17 chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Hehehee, chess piece war!
Funny and wholesome. Great work.
| smoking caramels chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
"At least there won't be any dents." Until one gets in the optic!
| E.Reeves chapter 1 . 10/14/2011
Haha! This is just great! I love it when they can just play around like this.