|Reviews for The Lost Fullmetal Heart|
| LadysWords chapter 15 . 11/5/2011
oh more characters in this one
though what she said made said.
| reallyneedsafanficaccount chapter 14 . 11/5/2011
Poor Hayate D:
| LightMyBulb chapter 14 . 11/3/2011
Really love this story! :) Ed's mature, Van's adorable, and Al's scary; who woulda thought? Keep up the good work and I hope you can update soon!
| Rhonne chapter 14 . 11/3/2011
Loving the story so far. I also really like to Ed/Riza pairing, I've always loved the not-so-common parings. I can't wait to see what happens next with angry bitter Al.
| Joker Oak chapter 14 . 11/3/2011
Al's going to jail, and I dare say that he's just destroyed all image his son my have had of him. Van will never return home with him, and poor Ed will be left to try and correct any and all mistakes he's made in Al's upbringing.
I vote for enter Winry, preferably as a character besides Hawkeye that Ed will open up to and tell things to, to help him recover from the reprehensible family state he is in.
| De-lurker chapter 14 . 11/3/2011
De-lurking over here. This is actually my first review ever (I've been reading many different fandoms for many many years). I just want to say that I really like your writing (the quality is pretty decent), your story (the unique directions that it has taken), and the frequent updates (you keep the reader wanting more but the updates make it bearable). I'm enjoying the Ed and Riza scenes and how you treat them as equals with mutual respect for one another. Honestly as for the age 'gap,' at their ages in the story, it is such a minor thing. As long as their is chemistry (which I do feel in your story) and mutual respect, it shouldn't be an issue. Added bonus: not one of the usual pairings which makes this story unique. Please keep on writing and updating frequently. Cheers! Re-lurking...
| meandmyfriend chapter 14 . 11/3/2011
Woo! Great job on these 2 chapters. D The fight scene was great, no need to worry too much about it.
Al should be ashamed of himself. After all Ed did for him, after all the sacrifices his brother made for him...
I have a suggestion if it's OK. It'd be good if you put in a chapter where Al has a guilt trip. You know. Hahaha. D
About the Ed/Riza pairing, I'm not sure how that'll work out. What with the age gap between them.
I can't wait for your next updates!
| LadysWords chapter 14 . 11/2/2011
o_0 damn another ?
interesting. I feel bad for Hawkeye :(
YES! Al is arrested.
When you think about it.. Ed is so responsible... actually when we know think about.. c'mon on he did grew up/ and was the protective older brother..of sorts. now look Al should be ashamed. After all Ed gave up everything for him..
| ungoliantt chapter 14 . 11/2/2011
just wondering if you will adress the obvious age gap between hawkeye and ed, and why him and winry never worked out :o
| VivaNewVegas chapter 14 . 11/2/2011
Hehe, new favorite author. Now, as for the review. Nice job on the more Ed/Riza interaction, good backstory, it was somehow similar to what I had thought, yet different. Now, to learn the specifics on what happened to lead Alphonse like this. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Of the story, not in science. Working on particle theory, much rather read this.
Two updates in under 12 hours, I'm happy.
| awesomenaruto chapter 14 . 11/2/2011
Yay! that cleared up many things! thanks! update soon please because this story is really awesome!
| ungoliantt chapter 13 . 11/2/2011
I was surprised (in a good way!) with al's intensity, just also thought that some Edwin might be enjoyable :) keep up the awesome work
| LadysWords chapter 13 . 11/2/2011
*sighs* another one already? ok ok. I am having a good day.
I feel sorry for Van. I honestly think he should stay with Ed. Al is a Jerk to put it simply. But if Al was like this toward his son (attitude wise) then I think I understand why Pinako and Van would prefer if Ed would be the "father". Mind you I think you should have Al arrested he attacked his brother; an officer no less. Also, I wonder if Al realizes Ed HELD back at all.
But you should have it explain it
ps - im kinda curious what Ed learned in the countries alchemy wise and who he met.
| Dylexa chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
Well, this story seems like it's worth reading! I liked this! I'll continue reading it! Your writing is pretty good!
| BicolourRaptor chapter 13 . 11/2/2011
Good chapter and good story but i cant say i think edward would take a beating lying down even if it is his brother