Reviews for He Was Real
dylanredefined chapter 1 . 7/20
Made me smile thank you.
Zan2011 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
i demand a second chapter this was really goof now i want to see everyone else lay into to him
Tairi Soraryu chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
A little choppy with the transitions between the time lapses, but that's understandable, as it spans five years. I like Sousuke's homecoming. What a lovable, silly dork. I like your minimalist style, you aren't too wordy, and it's nice to read. good job!
lhaine07 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
i owuld like to know what happened to him. it seems he have to explain. but the cool things as long as he came back to her is what is important
BlueLion chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
for typing this on the phone, remarkable, no typos that I'd have noticed.

Somewhat very long absence ... but the charas are fittingly outlined ...

Looking forward to your next works.
Enadryle chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Very beautifull! Sorry but I'm not a native english speaker so I can't spot if they are some typos