|Reviews for Gypsy Child|
| Stilphyell chapter 4 . 10/20/2011
I like this, I found it VERY interesting how you are writting and the complete memory loss. This is good, really good. Keep with it and remember that people is more happy if they read more ;)
| Archan9el S117 chapter 3 . 10/19/2011
Nice story so far, and an intersting read keep it up
| don'tbecoymccoy chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
I really like your story so far! (Oh, such a cliched comment), but anyways, I like that your SI is different, and I also like your attention to detail and the action in it. (in this chapter)...please continue! :D
| Empeorie chapter 2 . 10/18/2011
Shame you didn't call yourself Melody Pond but I guess that is the wrong fandom for it.
About your story the amnesia of your main character whilst making things interesting from a plot perspective does still leave the fact that we have very little knowledge of her personalilty and that she can't remember Mass Effect. But it's unique, which in Mass Effect Self inserts is well needed. Good luck.
Empeorie were done here...
| Stuch chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
As somebody who is just as guilty for the overuse of commas I should say don't worry about it. And whilst I am not personally a fan of SIs yours at least hasn't gone down the 'magical XBox' route.
I'll keep an eye on this one.