|Reviews for Unleashed Potential|
| Katz4 chapter 15 . 1/18
Never have I loved two OC's like I loved Sebastian and Adrian. I'm so glad they survived!
| cindy4651 chapter 10 . 8/14/2014
So wonderful, thank you! Great story, great writing, great grammar and mechanics!
| cindy4651 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
oh boy, I have read this before! I don't remember Merlin's reveal to Sebastian, but I am really really looking forward to it! I remember that I love Sebastian!
| wryter501 chapter 15 . 5/28/2014
a little ptsd and extra whump to end with? :P i did wonder if it was going to be a reveal story... and well-ended with seb & adrian, too!
| wryter501 chapter 13 . 5/28/2014
still curious to see what exactly merlin did to the dreafela...
hm, using the magic suppressant as a plug - interesting idea...
| wryter501 chapter 12 . 5/28/2014
oh, geez. now it's a combination horath&dreafela... twice as bad.
oh, merling - fight smarter, not harder. but then again, merlin's always been lucky rather than good... :P
if they knew that being bodiless was a weakness for the thing, might they not have planned for killing the human host from the beginning?
but i do like merlin and arthur being each other's salvation!
| wryter501 chapter 11 . 5/28/2014
ok, so now adrian is singing a different tune - no you can't come to yes please we need you...
| wryter501 chapter 10 . 5/28/2014
arthur's thought processes in figuring merlin out are always interesting...
okay, so now i'm thinking demons in supernatural (earlier seasons) - you can't kill them, but you can trap them, and send them back to hell... hm? :P
oh, dear, the dreafela with merlin's magic in arthur's body... can't get much worse than that. bring on the apocalypse...
i originally thought seb and adrian were going to distract/lure the greg/thing so that merlin could sneak in and rescue arthur - but what's their actual plan? if they can't fight it with magic, or without magic, and logically it wouldn't really leave arthur alone... ?
| wryter501 chapter 9 . 5/28/2014
hm, more complication. so horath is like a magic-vampire... can't help but wonder what might happen if he and the dreafela faced each other - such each other dry... :) okay, feeling a little violent today. cheerful, but violent.
i guess i'm having trouble following seb and adrian's logic in this chapter... if they know where arthur is, why take merlin at all; if think they'll come back successful or not at all, why bother with the ruse of keeping merlin tied; why give him the second dose if he's not even going into the ruin with them, and a sleeping spell is just as good...
| wryter501 chapter 8 . 5/28/2014
ok, so the black eyes makes me think of the manticore... gaius said that was undefeatable as well. but the broke its connection to its 'home world' say, and held it off long enough to die without the connection... and what about cornelius sigan, he wasn't actually 'defeated' just prevented from taking merlin's body under control, and trapped and locked away...
and yeah, i wondered if the druids would try to keep him away for his own good... 'big picture' and all that... interesting twist that this time it's the 'good guys' taking away his magic...
| wryter501 chapter 7 . 5/27/2014
hm, so sebastian is to be trusted - nice twist. i find i'm thinking of lancelot, here... a knight who knows, keeps the secret, etc. and has druid contacts - bonus!
| wryter501 chapter 5 . 5/27/2014
now sebastian is confusing me... merlin's magic thinks he's a threat... he thinks merlin's with the other three servants... but who is the 'he' that sebastian doesn't want merlin hurting? merlin thinks arthur, but he wasn't specific...
| wryter501 chapter 3 . 5/27/2014
you know, i highly suspected ethan had something to do with the plot... we'll see, i guess. i was rather afraid he was lying in wait to do something further to merlin...
| wryter501 chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
oh, creepy bad guy. a grudge and a hint of something really dark...
| wendums chapter 15 . 3/9/2014
You have a gift for storytelling. My only critique is that many of your spells seem more Latin than ancient druidic, imo. I am enjoying reading them and having many late nights as I am so enraptured. Thanks