Reviews for Departure
elainezen chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Wonderful story. Mick is back where his heart wants to be. Hopefully he will find the peace and happiness he is seeking. I love the way you have revealed Mick's feelings and character. I can see Rufus in every episode growing from a boy to the man Mick became in IASL. I love the way you write and am really enjoying each episode.
anyother chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Another little pearl, I loved it! You capture Mick's growing up perfectly.
Roofran411 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Well done! Can't wait to see where you are going to take Mick next.
Brit-bound chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
I can see how it moved itself along. Once Mick is committed and no one is standing in his way, it's a matter of closing doors. How often will he remember those good-byes in the future? What will happen to his family? You have a lot of questions left to answer in the future.

I loved the references to the sharks and the pearls - the dangerous things and the valuable things that will be part of his future. But, in fact, the sharks were not the most dangerous. They didn't take his leg. And the pearls were not the most valuable. They never held his heart.

Write on, KMK, and keep doing it so beautifully.