Reviews for Realisations
Munkeyfump20 chapter 1 . 3/26
Cliff hanger but sweet thanks for the very good read this still has potential for more
xanderseye chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Looking forward to the next chapter this fic has the potential to be really entertaining.
Symone Jackson chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
As an avid Mentalist fan, I appreciate the fact that you don't overuse creativeness to make the characters unbelievable. I can see Lisbon muttering to herself and Cho ignoring Jane. The only thing you may want to work on is regular punctuation, such as using periods at the end of dialogues and using more commas when necessary. You may also want to reread some sentences to make sure that they make sense. Otherwise, your content is really solid and you should progress further with what you have.
AshleeLovesCookies chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
A fire-fighter flirting with Lisbon, that is so cute. I agree with MaryJane, you should make another chapter.
MaryJane chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Love Jane and Lisbon fluffiness. Are you leaving it as a one shot or continuing? I think you have great material to continue for at least 3 chapters.
Jaimie255 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
You are back! I really liked this, especially the VanPelt and Lisbon friendship which is currently growing in season 4.