|Reviews for Down to the Marrow|
| Topaz18 chapter 7 . 4/11/2012
Hello, this is a review. This review is from a person who thinks your story is awesome enough to comment on it. Here is the review:
This story is the best! It is beautifully written and it always keeps you on the edge of your seat! Please, please continue it! I am still halfway confused on GLaDOS and Caro- the virus, but I love how this story is going along! Please, please, please write more! I absolutely love this story and it deserves to be continued! Please update soon!
| blackroz chapter 7 . 2/22/2012
NO ME GUSTA!
| blackroz chapter 3 . 2/22/2012
| MayDayGirl-Save-Our-Ships chapter 7 . 12/9/2011
Wow, this is such a great fic, I can't believe I haven't read it until now. And it just keeps me guessing, I have no idea what is going to happen next.
I really liked what you said at the end, and I think you are right. GLaDOS, despite studying them, really doesn't know much about humans. I also think testing helps her ego too. After she watches tests subject fail over and over again at tests that seem so easy to her, proves to her how superior she is. Of course, that probably one of the reasons Chell annoys her so much.
I can't wait for more of your fic!
| DabbledInDrabbles chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
oh yay! you updated!
i was worried that this fic was going to be discontinued! i was excited to see an update today!
i enjoy how you handle the characters actions and how they each hide motives from one another. i have read alot of fics where they all suddenly act like they are best friends with each other. snore snore. haha you keep it fresh though!
i do have one question though, about the empty table at the end.
was that table meant for chell? or is it still meant for chell, and therefore still relevant?
mmm now that im reading my question i realize that i might be asking too much about the plot...if its too much then nevermind!
once again, great job! cant wait for the next update
| RosieMe chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
This was really good! As always, of course. I can't wait for what happens next! :D
(I actually have an account on here under this name, I just didn't sign in.)
| commanderkitty chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
Uh oh. Chell is going to be hard pressed to get out of this one. ... considering the crusher, maybe a little too literally hard pressed. D:
| candycornfromspace chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
Ok, I love this idea of GLaDOS being 'childish.' Why haven't I ever heard that theory before? It makes SO much sense! Then again, this story beings up a compelling idea per chapter... such as test subjects being made mute to not damage AIs, the cat-turrets, Cave's car, Wheatley being a doctor... the list goes on.
The reviewer before me mentions that the bird comparison went right over his/her head at first, and, to be honest, I was still reeling from everything that had been going on in the story to process that wonderful bit of irony. It really was incredible though. Leave it to you to notice those crazy little tidbits :P
Please update quickly... quit your job, live off the charity of others, and just write fanfiction all day until this story is done. (For me?) lol
| Faux Promises chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
Man, let me just say one thing, it's so nice to have someone accurately characterize Wheatley. Like way too many people seem to entirely forget the 'bad ideas' part of him. They give him token stupidity but then don't really follow through with it. He's so delightfully incompetent here, without being totally useless. I like how he switches between "YEAH, LET'S STICK IT TO GLaDOS!" and "OHMYGODI'MSOSORRYDON'TKILLME!" That's totally perfect characterization, he's just like that in-game.
And as for GLaDOS, your dialogue for her never disappoints. Her motives here are just downright cold. But again, it's in-character for her. I'm glad you lightened her up earlier in the story though because it made this part less hostile toward her. It prevented her from becoming just a villain. It's characteristic of her, I think, to fluctuate between being antagonistic toward Chell, and then also kind of wanting some weird camaraderie from her.
Okay, the bird comparison was great. And it totally sailed right over my head until you mentioned it. Also, love the More Elaborate Trap. In-game, however, I always, ALWAYS suspected that the turkey leg and the more-elaborate-trap were one in the same. After all, GLaDOS thinks a sign with cake pointing to a fire pit is a good trap.
| Pandora.Writing chapter 7 . 12/7/2011
Nnrrggh. Need more. That's all I can say.
| Hijokugei chapter 6 . 11/30/2011
Very excellent! Continue your crafting of this story, you have a good thing going!
| woooah this is great chapter 6 . 11/20/2011
Gotta love stories that actually portray wheatley as an ID Core and not some uncharacteristically intelligent and brave superhero. I'm liking his character development and can't wait to see what's going on with glados.
UPDATE SOON OR I KEEL JOO :D
| Death of a Fact Core chapter 6 . 11/16/2011
Gotta say that I really liked this chapter. Much of the story so far has been GLaDOS and Chell-centric, so it was nice to have some more character development on Wheatley's part.
I miss GLaDy though. You write her so well, I feel... empty when she's not there. (Haha- that probably sounds a tad craazy. But seriously though...)
It's obvious that the next chapters gonna have some big stuff going on. Can't wait to see it.
| RosieMe chapter 6 . 11/15/2011
So good! I can't wait for the next chapter! Can you make a Space core human? He's completely my favorite core. Spaaaaaaaace! It's just so cute. I know that there's not a lot of personality in that personality core though, ironically. :D
| DabbledInDrabbles chapter 6 . 11/15/2011
the action was good in this chapter! i also liked how you handled the fact core and his unfortunate end.
i like how glados decides to 'fix' her problems too haha. i always kinda thought there was a love-hate relationship between them. i hope she doesnt try to outright kill chell!
ur such a good writer! keep up the good work!