Reviews for Unforgivable
Person chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
OwlGirl98 chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
awww so sweet
First-Rule-of-Magic chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Haha, that was good! :D I like it :)

Anyway, yeah, I read all three antries. They're good, you can relax. Good luck! :D

(I won't review all three, but know that I read them .)


Volcanic Lily chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Good length, and I'm SO glad you remembered that Sinead, Ned, and Ted are triplets (since some people forget and think Ned and Ted are twins and Sinead is older, and I don't know why, but it annoys me- XD). Silly Ned and Ted- the sibling code is of higher priority than the guy code, haha. :)

Anyway, one sort of big problem with this: the way you organize your paragraphs can make it pretty hard to figure out who's talking. But other than that, this was good. Good work. :)

Giraffes4Ever chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Definately deserves to win... not that i've read the other entries...Amazing!