im guessing the fanfic writer curse got you
but um
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the story is really good
easily one of the top 5 hp fics

also is this uploaded in ao3 as well? or is there a way to download this here?

plz update it's very interesting I hope u r well

Porfavor actualiza, me encantó mucho ️️

please new cap is fantastic

I LOVE THIS SMMM KEEP IT UP

man sadly i am not captivated by how the plot goes at all. Why are you having nott and ron act as though they are teenagers not 11 year old kids, and what is not a fully skilled duelist now dodging and all(without worry too WOW). Feels so contrived imo to have the nott and ron plot in year 1 as if you had no idea what to place and though year 1 cant be simple. Ron happy gryffindor wins is weird. Replacing Ron with Neville even though this is a ron centric fic (guess ron actually doesnt matter)

idk about how this story is written so far. firstly i dont think hermione is ooc since she wouldve acted just like this. why did ron keep running with them even after he realized he has a slip. Harry and neivelle wouldnt be mates just because ron is not in gryffindor. and hermione being their friend currently wouldnt make sense

ain't no way you think harry is "at least as strong as dumbledore or stronger". Also you saying "strong as severus snape or at least as strong as dumbledore" makes it seem like snape is stronger which i seriously hope you do not believe that

every time I see the word core I die a little on the inside.

You can really see Ron’s voice in the writing coming through

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH I WANT THIS STORY BACCCCCCCCCCCCCK...

So it has been abandoned. has it not?

This is a fun story. I've been reading this for the past 5 years and I just gotta say that thank you for writing this :) Only criticism I have is that Neville couldn't have beaten the chess game because Ron is the chessmaster. I like this story a lot. You've written it well. It's my favorite slytherin Ron story. I'm so glad this story exists. Take care and stay safe!

ROMIONE YAYYY

I'm pretty eager to read about Ron's summer holiday with the Weasley's and with Theo and Ron staying at Daphne's! Looking forward to the next couple updates!