|Reviews for When People Cross Paths|
| Naruhinalover chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
Nice chapter update soon
| redwolf23456 chapter 4 . 8/13/2012
Good story so far can't wait for more to come.
| Naruhinalover chapter 3 . 8/2/2012
I read all 3 of your chapters and i want to see where this goes update soon and for that last part is it how anko acts or dress?
| OneBornInDarkness chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
ALL HAIL THE LOG THE LOG SHALL SAVEITH AND TAKEITH US AWAY TO SALVATION! ALL HAIL THE LOG
| Sailor Moon1996 chapter 2 . 10/24/2011
Good story so far update soon please.
| Lord Anubis Judge of the dead chapter 2 . 10/22/2011
interesting story. i dont know how powerful these characters your adding are but i just have one request. please dont make them so redickulusly overpowered that they can do things like take on akatsuki by themselves or something. it seems like every story now that adds in new characters are too powerful and im just getting tired of it. i like your story and so far the characters are fun and seem that they will have a limit to thier power so im looking forward to more. its well written and i just hope you develope hinata and naruto's friendship before their relationship. i've also seen alot of storys where naruto is dating hinata the moment he finds out she cares about him and seems to instantly forget his crush on sakura. i just want to see him ease out of it instead of the "i loved sakura but now i love you because you have feelings for me" standard that happens too much. it doesn't make for a solid relationship to hinata if he switches feelings that fast. so please just work on their friendship and build his feelings for hinata before they get in a relationship because this story has potential and i want to see where this goes. good job so far and im looking forward to more.
| ShadowWielder14 chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
Still needs to be longer I think
| Wonderweed420 chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
kinda interesting. only 1 suggestion though. longer chapters
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Goof more plz