|Reviews for shake me up, break me down|
| brontide chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
I really don't know what to say, this was just beautiful. I enjoyed it thoroughly, and I think the characterization was well done! :)
| avalonchick5 chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
It's a bittersweet story with an interesting way to read it. What more can a freeverse reader ask for?
Though I did catch a few typos: there was a random 4 in there that might have meant something, but if it did, I didn't catch it.
| BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
This was so beautiful, GPTwinny, I just. Wow. I love it so much. And I'm shipping these two so hard, ngl. It was very beautiful. :D
I love it so much!
| mynameisvaleria chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
This is just BEAUTIFULl...
| inactiveaccount100000 chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
This is really nice. I like the strangeness of it. I think all the underlines and boldness and not capitalized names made me continue to read because it kept things interesting and it was on purpose. Smart. um, yup. I like it.
| renzhie chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
What can I say? You're one of the best freeverse writers, Rachel. Your wording is so beautiful and it is well done. :) Great job and good luck! :D
| ink-stained dreams chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
Sometimes I think the formatting of freeverses is overdone, but I like what you did with yours. It's just enough to put the emphasis in the right places. Nicely done piece
| justalittle l o o n y chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Wow. Wow Rach. That was brilliant. I loved Delilah's characterization, and how you made Tom's love out to be kind of creepy, but still believable, and then their breakup was wonderful. Great job!
| Chocolate Muffin being lazy chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Omigosh Alexander, this is sososososo beautiful.
It's sad and hauting and you showed Voldemort so well and just, akflandlandmalsx alsl.
I love it so much. It's absolutely perfect and if I could be bothered to login i'd put it straight on my favorites (I'll log in later and add it ;) )
anyhoo, it's just absolutely wonderful and flawless and just, aldnaksbbamas.