|Reviews for Scheherazade|
| Eleantris chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
Ahh, this was so beautiful! And you've got me flailing on that last bit. People say 'always' is overused now, but I definitely think that if Rick and Kate ever got married, they should say Always in their vows. :D
| bones35 chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
Good effort always shows - nicely done.
I like the notion of Beckett's ire is that he could have been killed, not that he was working on her mother's case.
Oh, and the idea of her using 'always' in lieu of 'I do' made me choke up. Wow! I'll tell you that does not happen very often.
| E chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I'm a little late to the party on this story, but nonetheless the flow and dynamic is fun as well as the way you are able to capture the characters voices. Kate's an amazing strong female character, but sometimes she's portrayed as too rough or to soft. However you seem to have hit the nail on the head in you're interpretation of her. Looking forward to reading the rest of this tale and seeing how you play with dynamics of Rick and Kate's relationship.
P.S. 1001 Arabian Nights in answer to your question at the end of chapter one. A very tongue and cheek way to represent how each chapter leaves you wanting more.
| Fictional Mind chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
Wow, I love your new chapter (as always). First of all: I really enjoyed how you led through all the steps without writing about EVERY little thing that happened in between. My favourite part was part IV. All the emotion and passion and them both being hurt, but still being able to understand each other's reasons for doing what they did...Simply beautiful. And even though the ending really is kind of a cliché, I kinda liked it, too, because "Always" just fits perfectly :D
| ShotsyGirl chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
Sorry it was the chapter from hell. I thought Steps 1 through 3 were very strong. I think because we were in her head or seeing her acceptance via conversations with Jim. Step 4 fell off a little in the intensity or expected aggression. Step 5, we were back to Kate's head a bit, but I would think full acceptance woudl come before they made it to the vows stage. Nice piece. But since you posted anew, I'm going back to read Three's a Crowd. It really is one of my favorites.
| castlebeckett siempre chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
| 1822andallthat chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
Have just read ch4 and 5. This is really good. Keep it up!
| TappinCastlefan chapter 5 . 11/27/2011
I love this one! It's fantastic! Great job!
| PurpleInMyBrokenHeart chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Je suis française et je ne cromprends rien, mais ça a l'air sympa!
| MysteryWriter815 chapter 4 . 11/12/2011
Um, how have I not read this chapter? I loved it! This AU world is totally awesome and would be really cool to expand upon (you know, if you get bored now that your exams are over ;) lol). Oh and I loved the group hug and can totally see that happening!
This story is going on my favourites list.
| Fictional Mind chapter 4 . 11/8/2011
Hey there :D
Sorry that it took me a while to post a review this time, cause I read the new chapter, but didn't have any time to comment on it right away, so I kinda forgot about it :/
Anyways, as ALWAYS (and I am very sorry that I actually have to tell you this every time) the chapter was amazing :D I feel like I'm repeating myself over and over again, but I don't know what else to say without lying. Your writing is fantastic and I don't know where you get your ideas and inspiration but keep doing what you're doing :D
I especially liked that this chapter had some angst in it, which is (almost) always a criteria that makes me happy :D The only thing I imagined kind of awkward is the ending when everyone's staring while Kate asks Castle out on a date. But hey, at least she DOES :DD
So nothing big to criticize, really! Just keep doing what you're doing and I'll try to be faster with my review next time ;D
| bones35 chapter 4 . 11/6/2011
Like that you've continued the story. Two years! Wow!
Love to see Lanie to push her.
Now, would love to read how Castle just decided that he wasn't more inquisitive.
| GENEVA chapter 4 . 11/6/2011
OMG THIS WAS PERFECT
| I'm Widget chapter 4 . 11/6/2011
Oh, such pain, and then the joy... I'm SO glad she went after him.
| knittingeek chapter 4 . 11/6/2011
Go Lanie! Soooo sweet :o)))))