|Reviews for Who Loves Who More|
| Yoyito chapter 1 . 5/15
awww this is such a sweet story! i am gald thta i found it!
| I am Shibuya's Composer chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
REVIEW THIS IF YOU CRY EVERYTIME (?) Haha! This is one of my favorites! And I finally remembered his name! Caelum! Yaaay! (If is it not: Close enough.) I deeply love this fic, every single word of it! It's cute, it's sweet, and I love Caelum's PoV, like, it describes perfectly Vanitas and Aqua's relationship.
The first time I ever read this, I was just too happy and shippy that I ran to my best friend's house (he's my neighbor) and "OMG DUDE I JUST READ SOMETHING BEAUTIFUL ANDANDNABDJshdha" "Jfc calm down, what did you read?" "A VanitasAqua one-shot or kind of." "I knew you shipped weird things but that's too much." "SHUT UP YOU DIDN'T READ WHAT I DID AND AND ifhakdhahgwaHd" "I SAID CALM DOWN D:! You just came here to tell me that?" "Nah, let's play KH in the Ps3." "Sure!"
Best friend ever. (?)
Anyways! I loved it. I loved it too much!
| Lumina Dusk chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
I really loved ur story! its just so sweeeeeeeeeeeet! w
Its actually thanks to ur stories that i loved this pairing the most than any pairing there are in kh.
Good job and keep making fanfics! I'll be looking forward to them! :D
| Shiori Yomu chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Ooh, wow. Their kid's pretty smart. :D definitely like the parents. :)
| Yue Asuka chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
after read the escape one i really could imagine how this story born but in au and i like it so much!
thank you for the great story XD
| YGP chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
This was a very sweet story. I like how you described the relationship between Aqua and Vanitas through the eyes of their son.
| cc chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
seriously SO sweet
i love this pairing so muchhh heheheh
thanks for writing!
| FlowersN'stars chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
This was really well written. I love how the son describes his parents love for each other and even when they have their fights, they love each other more than any other couple could. This was really good and you had a great plot,well done! :)
| QueenOfCrazy chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
That might have been one of the most beautiful VanitasXAqua stories I have ever read. It was lovely, well written. The phrases were all worded so perfectly. I can even see them having this little boy and screaming their lungs out at each other at the same time.
| TeeHunter13 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
| AnHeiressofaSOLDIER chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
What a magnificent little story you have here, Celine!
And isn't that song inspiring? It led me to writing an entire multi-chaptered SoKai story, after all. And I still think it's one of my best stories.
The song is powerful, and should be treated as such. And you've done very, very well here.
First off, I love that this stays with the canon you've created with them. I can look back at "Escape", for example, and imagine, "Okay. This is the son they could have had if Vanitas and Aqua could have been together.
And even though you say this is AU, I can imagine it isn't. In fact, I think this could work quite well as an alternate future game fic.
As always, I love the way you write Vanitas and Aqua. And I think you've discovered something very deep and true to them here. There's a thin line between "fairytale love" and "hate love" (for lack of a better term). And since most fairytale love is quite obsessive and intense, I can see how both sides could blend into the other.
Caleum is right. His parents do love each other, but it's more that they're opposites and clash. But I think it's the differences that they like about each other. They bring out different sides to each other and make them consider different things.
Very well done. I hope you explore more with their family. I'm particularily interested in what Caleum will end up to be. Probably the perfect bridge between them. Hahaha.
And I love the way Vanitas is in this! I'm on his side about the Unversed plushie. If this were canon, we'd definitely know why Aqua objected to that. LOL.
The fic description quote (the love versus lust one) is really funny, too. And Caelum's reaction when he finally realized what they were doing, but valued that it meant they loved each other. LOL.
By the way, love the pic on dA! I can so see him as their son.
Perfect work, Celine! Hope you're doing well and that we can talk soon.
NaNoWriMo's next month. I'm going to cross my fingers that you'll consider doing it alongside me this year;)
If you have time, and it's something you'd want to do, of course.
| Ravensung chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
| Lilac Phoenix chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
LE GASP! D: You gave them a baby!
Just kidding XD but this is a surprise.
Tenchufreak on DA used that song for a VanQua music video she made XD
Although I don't know how to pronounce Caelum, it seems like a pretty name for their little one.
This one-shot was well written and VERY, VERY sweet. I love the way you handled this. Your OC is adorable and just this story overall is so well handled.
I'm gonna refer Ann to this piece since I KNOW she'll enjoy this XD
Excellent work Celine!
| Kiryn chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Um...I've always thought that the two could be parents, even good ones. As evidenced by AEM. And damn it, but now you make me want to run off and write some more of that story when I should be working on my homework. My life is so unfair.
But anyway, awwwwwwwww. I love this story so much. Like, really. So very, very much. You've captured them all perfectly in here, and just...if I could hug this story, then I would. I suppose I'll just have to settle for hugging my laptop instead. *hugs*
Seriously, amazing, spectacular job. I could list every positive adjective in the dictionary, and I still wouldn't have enough praise for this story. :)
| Mirae-no-sekai chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Whoa... nice piece. And that's pretty much how they'd work out, if it ever happened...