Reviews for Uzumaki Naruto: Birth of the New Demon King
Guest chapter 2 . 10/15/2014
Loophole to your logic marido also means malestrom nice try though
Jmrocha1998 chapter 12 . 10/11/2014
Hey I've been reading your story over the past week, and I have to say I'm very impressed! I've read a lot of fan-fiction but I haven't seen any that have been so well put together! I really enjoy reading your author notes. Your not just spouting crap in them. Anyway just wanted to say thanks for writing this story! Your doing an awesome job!
missourijack chapter 4 . 10/4/2014
wiki/Natsume

I hope you will add her to the harem
God-ShadowEx100 chapter 17 . 10/2/2014
This trash has been reported. Pathetic konoha fanboy.
God-ShadowEx100 chapter 3 . 10/1/2014
Reported your pathetic konoha fanboy cock sucking faggot ass' you will be reported until banned. Your a pathetic author that is nothing but trash.
eugenio4079 chapter 21 . 9/24/2014
i really like how you build the characters up i like this fan fiction a lot
Cenright chapter 6 . 9/24/2014
On Suzaku's bow, an arrow gets 'nocked', because the arrow goes on the 'nock'.
Only a GUN gets 'cocked'.
Shinobi no Kami chapter 22 . 9/19/2014
This is a good story, just as good as The Tailed Tail wolf.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
This has a lot of stuff about yu yu hakaso. I wonder why? Nice story.
Vladimir chapter 22 . 8/16/2014
I hope u right sooner am getting tired of waiting
CartelRage chapter 22 . 8/15/2014
ARE YOU SERIOUS ?!
CartelHope chapter 8 . 8/12/2014
Yes! ANKO-SAMA IS HERE!
CartelHope chapter 7 . 8/12/2014
I just got a whole level confused...
Doombug chapter 11 . 8/12/2014
totally skip this chapter as it was pointless flashback, crappy rehash of the manga other than that the story is pretty good
Guest chapter 22 . 8/2/2014
I really love this story man your doing an amazing job with it please update soon
1,610 | « Prev Page 1 .. 2 3 4 5 6 13 .. Last Next »