Reviews for Uzumaki Naruto: Birth of the New Demon King
Mike chapter 3 . 11/7/2014
great chapter! Though your note at the end about Hinata never being paired up with Naruto is funny now that the manga has ended and Naruto ended up with Hinata and had 2 kids with her. Lol
shadowcolt7051 chapter 12 . 10/27/2014
I had a crazy thought. I know this story has been out for a while so maybe im not tne first one to bring this up.

If Yokai is LETHAL, POISONOUS, and DEADLY to non jinchurikis...

Why didnt he just start his fight with orochimaru with that?

Granted had that happened the fourth probably wouldnt have come back. But still he avoided using it in the matches so he wouldnt kill his opponents.

I will say this. I do enjoy how tne story is going so far. Im looking forward to the next several chapters.
myulander chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
nice job
Guest chapter 2 . 10/15/2014
Loophole to your logic marido also means malestrom nice try though
Jmrocha1998 chapter 12 . 10/11/2014
Hey I've been reading your story over the past week, and I have to say I'm very impressed! I've read a lot of fan-fiction but I haven't seen any that have been so well put together! I really enjoy reading your author notes. Your not just spouting crap in them. Anyway just wanted to say thanks for writing this story! Your doing an awesome job!
missourijack chapter 4 . 10/4/2014

I hope you will add her to the harem
God-ShadowEx100 chapter 17 . 10/2/2014
This trash has been reported. Pathetic konoha fanboy.
God-ShadowEx100 chapter 3 . 10/1/2014
Reported your pathetic konoha fanboy cock sucking faggot ass' you will be reported until banned. Your a pathetic author that is nothing but trash.
eugenio4079 chapter 21 . 9/24/2014
i really like how you build the characters up i like this fan fiction a lot
Cenright chapter 6 . 9/24/2014
On Suzaku's bow, an arrow gets 'nocked', because the arrow goes on the 'nock'.
Only a GUN gets 'cocked'.
Shinobi no Kami chapter 22 . 9/19/2014
This is a good story, just as good as The Tailed Tail wolf.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
This has a lot of stuff about yu yu hakaso. I wonder why? Nice story.
Vladimir chapter 22 . 8/16/2014
I hope u right sooner am getting tired of waiting
CartelRage chapter 22 . 8/15/2014
CartelHope chapter 8 . 8/12/2014
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