Reviews for Uzumaki Naruto: Birth of the New Demon King
Chiand'r chapter 17 . 9/21/2015
Gotta say, I'm hooked on the story. There's a few spelling errors in some of the earlier chapters, but other than that I'm enjoying it. Can't wait for future updates!
doubledamn chapter 1 . 9/14/2015
Is this the same as what is posted on , under the username Pokemaster12?
Guest chapter 22 . 9/13/2015
i would like more chapters
kanazak chapter 2 . 9/10/2015

Otherwise, interesting story. Fun to read.
thesleepingkami chapter 22 . 8/28/2015
Guest chapter 22 . 8/24/2015
This is the most cliche piece of trash I have ever read, thank you for your time

Let's go Team 7, council, bashers
madmanmark666 chapter 22 . 8/19/2015
Great story can't wait till you pick it up and add more chapters :-)
Noah chapter 7 . 8/15/2015
I figure it's because orochimaru's Edo tensei is not as good as kabuto's or that hashirama was fighting against his orders to beat the crap out of sarutobi
bjorn aleswiller chapter 8 . 7/25/2015
well maybe the first time when orochimaru resurrected them they weren't able to call on but a fraction of their true power... and were really MUCH more powerful in their lifetime :p
Sly the Coon Cooper chapter 22 . 7/24/2015
I honestly don't think Minato in canon should have been a parent, at least while being Hokage at the same time.

But this story did get me to like fatherly Minato stories. So there's that.
TenTailed chapter 2 . 7/21/2015
Great fanfic so far!
Btw wish u luck on your job
OfMoonsAndStars chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
Brilliant story. Your writing style is really engaging and I love the concept of how you're combining these two universes together.

But I do wish you'd warned this was a Harem story in the summary or intro authors note, instead of at the end of the first chapter...I'm not much of a fan of them, so I'm going to stop here. I just wanted to share how much I enjoyed the premise before dropping off.

grimmich chapter 22 . 7/8/2015
Unfortuately my damn tablet isnt logging me on but i wanted to give you props. I love this fic so far and i cant wait to read the next chapter so please update soon i have to see what happens next!
uaeoaeoeoi chapter 7 . 7/5/2015
1. Madara gained rinnegan after his fight with Hashirama
2. The Senju brothers under edo tensei were revived weaker than before they died (max chakra is equal to the person sacrificed it just regenerates after they use any) and further weakened because they had to be controlled to fight while likely resisting to further reduce their abilities during the fight, giving Sarutobi a double or triple handicap, the only real threat they made was that he couldn't outright kill either of them and they would not get tired from using jutsu turning it into an attrition battle until the death god was summoned and took their souls and Orochimaru's arms before Hiruzen burned out and couldn't keep the suicide jutsu going any longer
Guest chapter 7 . 6/20/2015
The reason why Hashirama was at a standstill against Hiruzen Sarutobi aka Third Hogake during the invasion was because he technically was not at his full strength while in the Edo Tensei, For an example , when Sasuke and Orochimaru went to the shrine and revived The First four Hogake, Orochimaru realized that Hashirama could have broken it at any time he wanted too and felt immence power from him. Which is not impossible since Itachi did it. On your confusion about Tobi before, its simple actually... he was never Madara in the first place he is Obito Uchiha who was saved by Madara on a mission with Minato, Rin, and Kakashi, and implanted Zetzu cells in him. He was just using the name of Madara to strike fear in the hearts of others. I just hate how Madara is so goddamn overpowerd, i mean come on really, the dude is basically made out to be a Freaking God during that War. Anyways theres your answer on the Third Hogake and Hashirama case. By the way i like your story.
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