Reviews for For Whom the Bells Toll
writtenbymonkey chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
I enjoyed reading your fic. I would have liked to see a little more character interaction. Maybe a conversation between kewne and Selphi. Its well described and features good character development. Its nice to see Gosh not being a git.

One note on the use of Japanese, It was not used in the English version game and it can be confusing to the average reader.

Looking forward to more.

Monkey.