Reviews for What Happens Without Merlin
Guest chapter 17 . 3/10
Hey! I absolutely loved your story XDD Thanks so much for writing it
Guest chapter 10 . 2/1
"A moment that the words don't reach
A suffering to terribleness to name
You hold your child as tight as you can
And puch away the unimaginable"

- It's Quiet Uptown
Hamilton: An American Musical
Lin Manuel Miranda
Guest chapter 17 . 7/1/2016
Omg i didnt expect this endong but i loved iiiiiiit!,
mizzymel chapter 17 . 11/23/2015
I almost didn't read this because it's not marked complete. I'm glad I did, it's brilliant.
daphnegg123 chapter 17 . 7/17/2015
Akayuki Novak chapter 17 . 12/13/2014
*laugh* Oh Merlin. The Fisher King, huh? I'm glad he found something that makes him happy.
eilonwy77 chapter 17 . 9/11/2014
Yup, that definitely was a bittersweet ending. You might want to mark the story complete, because I almost didn't read it, thinking it was unfinished. But I checked the comments and they implied it was done. I am glad I read it. :-)
eilonwy77 chapter 16 . 9/11/2014
Oh, it is so sad!
stracony26 chapter 17 . 3/6/2014
Aww. That was so good.
The World in Black and White chapter 17 . 12/12/2013
I thought it was great! I loved it and really enjoyed reading it! I'm glad that Arthur and Merlin reconciled in the end, it's always nice to see both of them *cough*Arthur*cough* grow up :)
xBookEaterx chapter 17 . 9/1/2013
That was a rather bitter-sweet ending, but I loved it! :D
ButchthePansexual chapter 17 . 8/17/2013
Brilliant. Absolutely wonderful. I am going to check if you've written a sequel to it and if yes, I will read it and if no, I will just read this one over again!
ButchthePansexual chapter 12 . 8/17/2013
Oh my gods. I love this story! It's brilliantly written and just plain amazing! Great job!
Rachelle Lo chapter 3 . 1/22/2013
Your characterization is good, but you might want a beta for your grammar. For example:
"Well?" He asked.

This should be -

"Well?" he asked.

"Way ahead of you my friend." He whispered. "Way ahead of you, my friend," he whispered.

The dialogue exchanges are the main grammar problem. End with a comma, not a new sentence.
CrimsonHawthorn chapter 17 . 11/24/2012
Loved this. I cried so much when Gaius died.
Kudos to you since I almost never cry when I read fanfiction.
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