|Reviews for What Happens Without Merlin|
| StarryNight359 chapter 11 . 11/13/2011
this was defs an intense chapter
i hope those two will resolve their problems :(
| Bottled Sunshine chapter 11 . 11/13/2011
Great update. I'd love to see how Merlin intends to be a physician without magic. Not that I doubt him, of course, just that I'm curious to see what he does. Yay for those silly boys having a quasi-normal conversation!
| godsdaughter77 chapter 11 . 11/13/2011
I think you are doing fine! I look forward to the next chapter!
| bbb136 chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
Not to worry, it's slowed down again - OH MY GOD GAUIS btw. It happens sometimes that when you're writing your mind moves faster than the story progresses, and you only ever notice the second or third time you read it.
I've done it loads of times. _ But on the plus side I've gotten very good at quickly spotting parts I'm rushing and slowing down. ;)
As always, great chapter.
| jedichild chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
Aww, poor Gaius. Or, if Dumbledore's words are too be followed, poor Merlin and Arthur.
May the force be with you
| Ddiwerth chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
That was so beautiful...the angst...the quiet sorrow. I really felt Merlin's pain and Arthur's stoic sympathy. Yes, I would say expertly handled (and not too OTT, either).
| Sacred3 chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
This was done beautifully. So tragic and the depth of emotion amazing. Loved yet hated it for the bittersweet finality of Gaius.
| MediEvil Ways chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
Perfect. Touching. Of course, most people who are dying haven't got breath to talk with, but this is magic and it works like a charm. :)
| thebeautifulbicky chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
YOU... YOU... YOU KILLED GAIUS! HOW COULD YOU! But yes, it was done spectacularly well. BUT YOU STILL KILLED GAIUS!
| Ann Magus chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
| sarajm chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
Sob! Beautiful ;)
| Dirl15 chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooo! why, why... that was beautiful very emotional... please update soon and does Merlin stay or does he TRY to leave again?
| beej96 chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
You moved me to tears. Either you have incredible empathy or you have been there. Well done on getting it into words.
| StarryNight359 chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
| Pica Britanica chapter 10 . 11/10/2011
OMG this is so sad. I see what you mean about the crying now Sunshine. Keep up the good work, it's a very moving story.