I am a good Christian but this story rocked me good and proper.

Wow this story is even better than I remember. Probably the best triwizard rewrite I’ve read. I love how essential the hallows have become as a mystery, the one issue I had in the climax of the original was that the hallows weren’t foreshadowed earlier. Anyways, I love what was written here, I guess I will need to come up with an ending to this au in my head.

As if, at the distance from the tables up to the dais Dumbles stands at, you can actually SEE the color of someone's eyes. OK, they're blue. BFD! He probably charms them to twinkle, too.

I always like it when you allow me to hate Dumbledork. Here's hoping for some good, solid, Weasley bashing, later.

Sighs. Sirius, ever the Gryffindor.

Good read but I'm disappointed you didn't finish it... you're so close. I hope everything is well with you.

Where are the next two chapters?

My future's bleak but this story helped me through my lonesome blues today and I will be thinking of it for nights to come so thank you mister. Just that noone cares about me in the way they care for others but this story helped me escape my misery capiche? I want to get to know the brilliant man who wrote this actually so thank you ots my friend for helping me while away the wee small hours on a Thursday.

can't BELIEVE you left it on this much of a cliffie! I want the reactions, dammit. Ah well, I love what you've done here

awesome. While the duel took time, i expected beaux chmpn to come on seen. Livedthe animation ending. With the same leugg from Mara, I expected the laughing hex.

How crafty can you get? Bith 2nd and 3rd tasks were exceptional and origin magic themes in the settings you gave them. I may have read only 24M words of fanfiction and crossovers so I appreciate your variety. Triwizard without Krum and Fleur. Well done as well.

The parental / Lisa interactions and casual. Top marks!

a lot of magic is simply a matter of intent and willpower... okay it was said in this chapter, but did Harry absorb it?

Dumbledore is a prick that way he uses oblivrrate - makes more sense why year 2 Lockhart use of charm was Dumbles.

You wpuld like #1 enchantment sought out by purebloods and old families would be protection for their heirs. Also it should be an unforgivable as portrayed in your story - no matter how realistic and vasual it seems it should be uaed.

To think Lily and James wont know their heir was tampered with.

Excellent job. The character interplay is more intelligent than canon. Richard Harris not withstanding.

I saw you avpided Harry making the leap from "focus" on one book adv8ve to importance of focus, i.e, intent, in success with spells and advanced waveleas magic

Well damn, I thought we were going to have a good Dumbledore for a change. Just about every story I read these days Dumbles is the true Dark Lord all along.

This story was better than it had any right to be. Can we get another chapter or nah?