|Reviews for Hallowed|
| Mohammad.Alzo chapter 14 . 10/1
Why do all the good stories update slower than a snail?
| Tiffanyyylin chapter 14 . 9/30
Great chapter. :) I feel like you cleared up a little bit confusion about the romance in it, which is relieving. I used to be a big time H/Hr shipper but then I found they had a much more interesting dynamic as brother/sister best friends than romantic.
I'm an H/G shipper myself but your story is so good I wouldn't stop reading if you paired him with an OC.
I love your descriptive writing. You give JUST the right amount of detail in each introductory scene and points of interest thereafter.
| Armapella chapter 14 . 9/30
So they actually needed to team up to know the answer ? Or at least share what each of their clue was ? That's brilliant !
| Tilius chapter 14 . 9/28
| Man of Constant Sorrow chapter 14 . 9/27
The lack of Hermione, and more to the point Harry/Hermione , is making me lose interest in this otherwise well written story. Personal preference, not a reflection of story quality, but I figured I would state my opinion.
| yamanana chapter 14 . 9/27
Man your story just keeps getting better and better! I really am looking forward to what is coming next. Perhaps some Voldemort action as well? Thanks again!
| JPElles chapter 14 . 9/27
Nice. I like Harry's first date here. Nice setup and execution. And Harry's observation of the other champions is nice too. He's seeing that this is a competition. A matter of life and death you can help other people. Like the dragons. That's a matter of survival not helping them win. With other things... It's a competition. A competitive spirit is always a good think.
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/27
I'm delighted to see another chapter. Thanks.
| The Great Hall of Misanthropy chapter 14 . 9/27
This is beautifully written. Harry's a sweetheart - not quite powerful enough to warrant eye rolls, but just about competent enough to deserve sympathy. While I'm not biased towards a particular SORT of Harry Potter depends on the writing), I think you've portrayed an intelligent, gifted Harry, who's not playing in the Dumbledore-Voldemorf leagues, quite well. A great protagonist, though quite short of being a hero (but that may be my fault - in my mind, heroism and power are inextricably linked).
| Fibinaci chapter 14 . 9/24
NIce Harry discovering his hormones and getting a clue about his clue(thanks to Lisa(a nice non-standard choice for date)) as well.
| tumshie chapter 10 . 9/24
Re-reading this chapter and found a major flaw, there is mention of the previous year's tournament being at Durmstrang and then Hermione stating that the last tournament being in 1792, you can't have both.
| Mudsock chapter 14 . 9/24
This is a very interesting fanfic. It's well written, well paced and original enough that it doesn't feel like a rehash of the books with a small twist.
I'm very intrigued about what's going to happen. I think that's one of my main criticism, I don't know where this story is going. Usually in most stories by the 10th chapter, the reader knows where the story is heading, a general idea of what's going to happen, but not how.
I don't get that from this story. That being said you already hooked me in, so now I'm with you till the end.
I can't really give you my whole opinion on this chapter, because I can't really remember the rest of the story since its been so long, I do wish the updates were more frequent, but the long chapters are very appreciated. As of now, with my lack of knowledge of the other chapters, I kinda wish Harry asked Hermione to the ball, whether in a way to further repatch their friendship, or in an actual attempt at romance between the two.
Again, I don't remember if her and Ron are a thing, or if she likes somebody else.
I'll also have to reread this chapter to see if there was any mention of whom her date was, I'm not sure if I glossed over it or if it wasn't included in.
In any case, rambling aside, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and I can't wait for the rest.
| Blazeboss chapter 14 . 9/24
| Seas and Shadows chapter 14 . 9/24
So, a Chimera then? I'm pretty sure that it's a Chimera. Or however you spell it - Grammar and the like isn't always my forte.
| The Defenestrated Typewriter chapter 14 . 9/23
I'm guessing the challenge involves a chimera then, it will be interesting to see what you come up with.