Reviews for Hallowed
Space Lightning chapter 17 . 4/17/2021
Wow this story is even better than I remember. Probably the best triwizard rewrite I’ve read. I love how essential the hallows have become as a mystery, the one issue I had in the climax of the original was that the hallows weren’t foreshadowed earlier. Anyways, I love what was written here, I guess I will need to come up with an ending to this au in my head.
GF chapter 2 . 9/5/2020
As if, at the distance from the tables up to the dais Dumbles stands at, you can actually SEE the color of someone's eyes. OK, they're blue. BFD! He probably charms them to twinkle, too.
G Fawkes chapter 1 . 9/5/2020
I always like it when you allow me to hate Dumbledork. Here's hoping for some good, solid, Weasley bashing, later.
ObsessivelyObsessiveObsession chapter 1 . 4/2/2020
Sighs. Sirius, ever the Gryffindor.
Captain Cranium chapter 1 . 3/25/2020
Good read but I'm disappointed you didn't finish it... you're so close. I hope everything is well with you.
Guest chapter 17 . 1/5/2020
Where are the next two chapters?
Sorrowful Sammy chapter 17 . 8/1/2019
My future's bleak but this story helped me through my lonesome blues today and I will be thinking of it for nights to come so thank you mister. Just that noone cares about me in the way they care for others but this story helped me escape my misery capiche? I want to get to know the brilliant man who wrote this actually so thank you ots my friend for helping me while away the wee small hours on a Thursday.
FireAndSteel chapter 17 . 7/19/2019
can't BELIEVE you left it on this much of a cliffie! I want the reactions, dammit. Ah well, I love what you've done here
DidYouSayTim chapter 17 . 5/9/2019
awesome. While the duel took time, i expected beaux chmpn to come on seen. Livedthe animation ending. With the same leugg from Mara, I expected the laughing hex.
DidYouSayTim chapter 16 . 5/9/2019
How crafty can you get? Bith 2nd and 3rd tasks were exceptional and origin magic themes in the settings you gave them. I may have read only 24M words of fanfiction and crossovers so I appreciate your variety. Triwizard without Krum and Fleur. Well done as well.

The parental / Lisa interactions and casual. Top marks!
DidYouSayTim chapter 7 . 5/8/2019
a lot of magic is simply a matter of intent and willpower... okay it was said in this chapter, but did Harry absorb it?

Dumbledore is a prick that way he uses oblivrrate - makes more sense why year 2 Lockhart use of charm was Dumbles.

You wpuld like #1 enchantment sought out by purebloods and old families would be protection for their heirs. Also it should be an unforgivable as portrayed in your story - no matter how realistic and vasual it seems it should be uaed.

To think Lily and James wont know their heir was tampered with.
DidYouSayTim chapter 5 . 5/8/2019
Excellent job. The character interplay is more intelligent than canon. Richard Harris not withstanding.

I saw you avpided Harry making the leap from "focus" on one book adv8ve to importance of focus, i.e, intent, in success with spells and advanced waveleas magic
IamKroGan1 chapter 1 . 1/10/2019
Well damn, I thought we were going to have a good Dumbledore for a change. Just about every story I read these days Dumbles is the true Dark Lord all along.
Redhawk29 chapter 17 . 11/20/2018
This story was better than it had any right to be. Can we get another chapter or nah?
RowanRhys chapter 17 . 10/9/2018
An excellent story, and I really like this Ravenclaw Harry. To many stories with him sorted to Ravenclaw still have him being a Gryffindor in blue and bronze and do not take into account more than the superficial "bookworm" stereotype traits. This Harry is a great balance between his Mum and Dad as you have written them, and I find him a very appealing personality. Being raised without celebrity in his birth family, free from the traits developed by the Canon Harry to survive the Dursleys' neglect and abuse, it makes sense that this Harry is profoundly different in personality and expression from the Harry Potter of the books.

I also am intrigued by this story's Voldemort and the change in his focus from his flight from Death and the domination of the Wizarding world to his desire to acquire the Deathly Hallows and take power using them.

The tasks for this Tri-Wizard Tournament are great! Frankly, to me, they and the final competition in this tale are much greater challenges that make a contestant dig deep to use all of their skills, talents, training, and inborn intellect, cunning, common sense, and courage, than did the "bread and circuses" style tasks from the books.

I do hope that you will continue this story to, at least, show the consequences of Harry grabbing the Tri-Wizard Cup. May your muse be generous and your life give you the time and energy you need to bring this fan fiction to a satisfying conclusion.
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