|Reviews for The Jackal, 13 Ghosts Narrative|
| ZombieExterminationSpecialist chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Watching this now! I love this movie, Jackal was my favorite ghost!
| tiffany.turner.92 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Whoa. Very, very nice.
| nightmarefromthe90's chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Decently done. I think the nurse attack could have been more violent he is the jackal after all.
| rodeoCLOWNgirl chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
Oh my gosh...this was a stunning piece of work. You are very talented. This was incredibly dark and vivid in its descriptions. I'm thoroughly impressed. Well done!
| Nickolaus Pacione chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Okay this isn't too shabby for a story I've seen both versions of 13 ghosts and this is the kind of story that would give you an invitation to become a published author if the right publisher came along. I am doing this anthology and want to give you an invitation to write an original horror story between 2000-10,000 words for the project. If you can do this with characters that don't belong to you, imagine what you can do when you own the characters.