|Reviews for Coexistence|
| Ariel chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
I did enjoy it! :)) I kind of wish theresa more but still good :)))
| Ariel chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Im hooked on this first chapter! I'll read more now :))
| Willyng-80 chapter 2 . 11/6/2013
I could not stop reading this it was that amazing! I wish it were longer but what else could you write? I hope you'll write other stories though you have a really nice writting style :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/26/2013
Incredible story of AU I just wish it was longer...ever thought about a sequel/prequel/anyequel?
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Intriguing start, I'm interested in reading more.
| Mrs fitz chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
Wow this is like nothing I've ever read but that is a good thing I love it. I love that it's two parts cuz there's more to read :))
| scorchedtrees chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
I really like this; it's an interesting and unique Zutara idea. I wonder what would happen if they actually found the Avatar...
| HoTniGhtS-COOlDrAgONs chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
what an amazing and poignant first chapter. this is so good it could stand strongly on its own. really gave me that melancholy and desperate feel.
| HarmonicEnigma chapter 2 . 8/21/2012
That was a wonderful short story. Your writing flows so beautifully. My heart ached for Zuko when I read it from his pov. The way you described his love for her was like poetry. I wish a man would need me with such passion lol. I'm new to fanfic & your my favorite author so far. Keep up the great work! :)
| EscapetoMusic chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
awww:) they are too cute together, despite what others *cough cough sokka cough cough* think
| Dr. Phalange chapter 2 . 8/12/2012
| accioyourheart chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
I read this a while back, and forgot to review and favorite. Oops. Okay, this is amazing. I love the AU. I could feel, like pain, in my stomach after reading this. You beautifully incorporated their thoughts, and made a bittersweet story. Goodness, the characters were still there. Their feelings towards everything were still there in this fantastic timing for showing everything was perfectly done, and, as always, the story was extremely well done.
| echotheinferno chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
i love it, its an interesting au, wish it was longer).
| Boogum chapter 2 . 2/25/2012
Poor Zuko. He really does seem like the one who feels things so much more intensely than Katara. Or maybe it's just because he's able to accept and look into himself more deeply than Katara does. Either way, I always find his point of view somehow intense and a little angsty. This isn't a bad thing - just something I've noticed and felt like commenting on. _
| Boogum chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Oh. This is actually really lovely. There were some beautiful descriptions in here, and oddly my favourite part was when they had sex at the end. LOL.
Seriously, though, you wrote them coming together so sensitively and poetically that I couldn't help but feel for them. There's a lot of emotions in this piece, and for a chapter that doesn't have much conversation you did wonders for keeping my attention.
Really, I enjoyed this a lot and am only sorry I wasn't able to read it earlier.