|Reviews for Coexistence|
| Gail Lucinda Autor chapter 2 . 2/4/2012
Wow, this is a beautiful two-shot :) I loved it. So wonderfully written. I'll subscribe in case you do decide to continue it, but I'm not sure how that would affect the dynamic. Really it's wonderful as-is.
| Miss Faber chapter 2 . 12/4/2011
Zuko is heart-wrenching.
Reading this from Zuko's point of view makes it even better! You did an amazing job pulling this off. Definetely one of my favorite stories on the site!
| Miss Faber chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
That was definetely unique and original. I like the whole dark, desperate need that lies between Zuko & Katara- it just makes it that much more interesting. In addition, I really like your writing style and your choice of words.
| Gwendalyn chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
Something is up with because it is not sending me alerts when you update! SO MAD!
As for the latest instalment of Coexistence what can I say other than brilliant? I must admit that I'm a humor/romance fan but you write angst so well that it makes me speechless. On top of that you write men beautifully, especially Zuko. You manage to keep him perfectly in character but explore hidden facets of his that one cannot help but believe are true. You take a two dimensional character and make him 3D! I hope you update your other stories soon. I always look forward to them.
| starlit chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
Wow. Just beautiful writing and story.
| Bolin 4 President chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
Damnit! You're making me like Zuko when I shouldn't! Like I said, I don't even like Zutara (I'm a Kataanger), but I can't deny how beautiful your writing is. You're so convincing. :tears:
| Shippooliver chapter 2 . 11/22/2011
Loved it! Lots of uncertainty and raw emotions! Nice flow to the story and easy to read. I also liked the balance of seeing into both Zuko and Katara's minds! Would love to see more or another similar story!
| anonymous chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
| Aliens R Us chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
WHY DID MY EMAIL SEND THIS UPDATE TO SPAM? WAAAAAAAAAA!
Dramatics aside, I'm SO glad you updated this. *dances* How you write Zuko is just so UNG! You manage to show the awkward shell of a boy yet with this sensual exposing maturity and fragility that makes me melt. You should really write and publish romance novels. I'd buy them all!
| PBJ chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
As a two-shot this is perfect, but I would never be opposed to a continuation. Your stories always manage to allure me and turn me into a sappy romantic. Damn you! ;P
| Literary Midget chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
You never cease to amaze me with your skills, my dear.
| November chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
| Soft Kitty Song chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
I can't get over how much I love your writing style AND how you write men. Since I've read stories from each of your fandoms you've written for, I have to say that how you write male characters is FANTASTIC! Don't get me wrong, I like your female characters too. Katara in the first chapter sets the mood and the story while the romance scene is very hot. You manage to get her hesitant, stubborn, guilt-ridden personality down pat. And then there's this chapter with Zuko. GUH! His exterior is still that cool awkwardness but inside you make him so human, so sympathetic. His struggle over the right thing to do and what his heart feels is so apparent and heart-wrenching.
I have to admit that I am often struck speechless by your talent. Your ability to harness and convey emotions in so few words is amazing.
| Roots207 chapter 2 . 11/19/2011
Omg! This was so great! I loved it so much! I understand that its only a two shot but if you could this would make a great story. It has a great storyline and I would love to see how and why things came to be in this fic! Anywayz even if it stays a two shot its still great and I cant wait for the next update for
| Couture Girl chapter 2 . 11/19/2011
Definitely likeZuko's POV better! I think I enjoy reading more male POV's lol.
Wonderful job as always Lia!