|Reviews for Coexistence|
| Couture Girl chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I can't believe myself for not reading this much earlier :(
I do apologize Lia. RL sucks right now.
You know I love how you write :D I can feel what Katara is feeling, these emotions that tear her apart!
I will be reading the next chapter, and your other stories :)
| Ruby of Raven chapter 2 . 11/19/2011
| AnnaAza chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
I love how you write Zuko's thoughts. They're so very complex and so like him! And some Zutarians write sex for...sex. But your sex always has meaning and a real story behind it.
| Jane Keybored chapter 2 . 11/18/2011
Loved it... how are you so good at writing such depth? It's what I love about The Fifth Column too.
Uh! So passionate, dark, deceiving... I'm kind of glad it's only a two-shot, as much as I want to read more, I can't imagine how you would write Katara's discovery or decision should she ever find out Zuko's deception. Nor can I imagine what it would be like if Zuko finally succumbed to his guilt over lying to Katara or his fear of losing her. Phew!
| Roots207 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
I must say this is a great story! I love your writing so much. I love the storyline and how they met its so great! Cannot wait for part 2!
| Bolin 4 President chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I'm not even a fan of Zutara, but this is beautifully written. It's like you have a super power. You make me like this couple. You're evil! ;0) Update soon, please!
| Royal Lioness chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
| Literary Midget chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Sensual, provocative, well-written - what more can I say? What I like the most about this is that it can stand alone as a one-shot and be satisfying. I do look forward to part two, which I'm sure will be just as sexually charged.
I'm curious: did you win the challenge?
| trumpetgurl92 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
I really need to go study but that can wait. That was sooo amazing. I really like this and the 5th column too. you are a really good writer and I have enjoyed everything I've read so far. keep up the awesomeness!
| Jane Keybored chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
I knew there was a reason I added you to my Author Alert. (hope that doesn't sound rude, like you don't deserve to be added to a favorites. I've only read The Fifth Column of yours, which I never reviewed, but I really should. Because it's awesome. And you're the only author I've followed.)
This story is awesome too. You're brilliant! Really looking forward to what Prince Zuko thinks in Ch. 2. Thanks for this!
| Kimberly T chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Ohhh, angsty and sexy simultaneously. You have a gift, m'dear.
| xxZutaraFanxx chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
And part 2 is where young lady?
I mean this was in a word...Fantasic! You write so wonderfully and everyone is so in chasracter and everything is so smooth eventhough Katara's thoughts are disjointed...It flowed so perfectly. You truly have a gift.
I cannot wait to read Zuko's part. I love this AU!
| Gwendalyn chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
I think it's illegal for Zuko to that hot, but I'm willing to be arrested to partake in this illicit affair. Not that I'm offering myself to be part of a threesome... Seriously, how can he be that sexy and sweet while half-asleep? I want your Zuko. Right. NAO!
I understand Katara's guilt and shame here and that's why I'm not going to do the typical "suck it up, Katara, you have an awesome guy!" And I think that's why your writing speaks to me. You take a character I normally dislike (Katara), and you make me identify with her. I have no idea how you do it since you've confessed several times that Katara is your least favourite character. LOL!
In all honestly, this is a great beginning to a very intriguing story and is satisfying enough on its own as a one-shot, but I REALLY want to find out why Zuko was called up on deck.
| PBJ chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Love it! Love it! Love it! MOAR NAO! XD
| Aliens R Us chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
About time you graced us with an update to some delicious Zutara! I was beginning to go through withdrawal! I expect an update on The Fifth Column STAT!
What can I say about this other than AMAZING! So hot and sensual and some great writing to boot. Can I say that your Zuko is so friggin' adorable AND sexy? That's right, Katara! Try not to cry because Zuko is so awesome.
Bring on Part II, ma cherie! :D