Reviews for The Draw of Magic
Ae3qe27u chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Put it in past tense. It's a more likable tense and this story takes place in the past.
Verity chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
This is beautiful, original, lovely prose. Their dialogue flows well, the story is intriguing and you nailed the characterization. Flawless.
Zwart Wit chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
This is interesting intake about how Helga and Salazar meet :D
Kaiyojin Kobayashi chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
Incredible. I've never seen Helga's family in a story before, which intrigued me. Helga and Salazar's wordplay was entertaining, to say the least. I think Salazar found more than he bargained for...

Also, I don't know if this was intended, but throughout the story, I saw everything as a buttery yellow color, excepting Salazar and the crows. A very nice touch whether you meant to portray that or not.

Kaiya
Qu0thTheRavenNeverm0re chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Beautifully written! :) Love it