loved it :)

Awesome story.

Your tales are always a treat. and it's always amazing how some minor changes can result in major developments, causing the number of books required to be written to be reduced to four. Incidentally, once again everything is a lot more logical than canon. And I believe H&H's laughter at the idea of Ron ever becoming a prefect will e shared by a multitude of readers.

Loved the story. I think that you point out a great point in the story and also a flaw. Often times when a girl is "best friends" with a boy she isn't seen as "a girl" until a major event occurs to make him notice. Harry fits this mold perfectly, however, I do agree as this story does that he would ask after that event if his first choice is not available. This universe seemed to write itself (especially the movies) as H/Hr but yet JKR seemed to force the other ships even to the point of it being awkwardly done. Looking forward to the next story. Will one be about Hermione and her fifth year study group?

Epic, simply epic! You, Chemp Proff, really write fantastical Harmony. I actually started reading this fanfic and might have commented on it already but I just want to applaud you for it again. It's really awesome how there's a Good!Dumledore for once who's not trying to steal Harry's fortune or control the world. Those are really outlandish and while he did manipulate Harry to some extent, I find it a breath of fresh air to have only minor character-bashing (namely Ron and not even Ginny which is fine by me), and a good clean fanfic where Harry doesn't turn dark and go all superpowered.

Now, I do like a few of those fics but in moderation so this was particularly good as Harry doesn't permanently leave the country (another pet peeve) and thrash everyone in sight save for his love interest, etc. How he and Hermione got together was brilliant too and particularly epic as I could just picture that happening and I was grinning like a fool. His holiday was also nice and not too cliche which was swell. So overall I can only say good things about this one-shot and would rate this fanfic 100 stars. I think I shall go read The Last Dance now if I haven't already.

Superb and congrats! :)

P.S. I'd totally read a sequel to this if you'd write one although I think that how you stopped is a great (sad, but great) finish.

Yes, it's another good one!

THIS is exactly how the goblet of fire book should have been! Thank you so much for such a lovely story, you continue to amazed me with your wonderful work.

Big hugs

Ana

I really like this story. It does answer a lot of questions that weren't answered in a lot of other stories. I really like the ending. Everyone lived happily ever after. My kind of ending after all the garbage, bad new, bad choices and bad people are dealt with. Thanks for another great journey through the Potterverse. I really like the journey's with you. They are so much richer than other stories I have read. I look forward to more of Harry's and Hermione's adventures. pms

You're a champ Professor. Great work as always.

I flove it. It's good to see that they thought about their feelings & not just like 'hey, Hermione is a girl, ding I'm in love' but with your writing style we didn't have to wait 78 chapters for them to get their heads out of their asses!

Keep it up, cant wait to see more from you!

Not bad. I think it could have used a little more tension, but over all it was an enjoyable read. I look forward to more offerings from you in the future. Thanks for writing!

Great story.

Thanks for writing it.

I really enjoy reading your stories...PLEASE keep them coming!

;-D

You have a great storytelling ability!

KUTGW,

Noreen

Cute little one-shot. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you.

I really liked this story, it doesn't leave anything left out, and it brings together everyone in the story I liked. Great work! Can't wait to see more from you :)

excellent short story