Reviews for Four Ways to Apologize
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
That was ...meh.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2014
I've jut found this little gem and I'm so glad that I did! Your writing is beautifully simple and honest, but very descriptive at the same time... One of the things that has always bothered me about Bella in canon is the way she loses herself and becomes who other people wanted her to be instead of being true to herself. I absolutely love that in this story Jacob only forgives her when she apologizes as herself, with her own simple words, instead of how other people she knows would apologize. One of the most thoughtful one-shots I've ever read.
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
This is lovely and perfect. I am so glad I found it. She made the right decision and said goodbye to Edward and is getting stronger in who she is. Now her apology is her own too. Jacob will forgive her, she is part of who he is. I think this is one the best Jacob returns short stories written, it is really wonderful.
lucyferina chapter 1 . 2/1/2012
I adore your way of describing feelings, emotions and people... they are very real...