Reviews for What is Mine
HolyGoatLaugher chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Did you name the character after Johnny Depp's daughter?
RedEyedOreos123 chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
I'm loving this!Plz continue!
ZenyZootSuit chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Nice job!
Miss Geneve Sutcliff chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Omg! You are so great! I loved this... But now I want to read more :'( I dont know if you have thought of continuing this, but I think that you should. It has potential in being one of the best willy/ oc fics ever!
RevolutionRoulette chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Wow, interesting couple chapters so far.

It's good to see that you've been playing around with ideas on and off, it gives growth to yourself as an author and the plot of the story; shows mental growth. I do that with my stories all the time - start something, pause and come back to it a year or two later.

What's the most intriguing is that, there is implications to further development of their relationship without being obvious. It's not just specified as "romance" or "friendship", it's a blend of many genres in one story and that's what good fiction is, you've taken a fan fiction to a whole new level. You've allowed the reader to take their own interpretation in how this relationship is going to develop between Wonka and Lily.

I hope you come to continue this :)