Reviews for Temptations
023Faust chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
This is fantastic :) you've captured Basil's character perfectly
Requiem for Rain chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Wow. I really liked the angle you took with this story. It's very interesting to see Basil's point of view. Especially as he is an artist, and I thought that whole talk about ideals was rather fitting. I feel you ended it on a perfect note, with Basil still worshipping him. However, if you were going write from Basil's POV, I would have preferred not using those quotes 'like this'. People would understand that t would be his POV. Your grammar was great, vocabulary not overloaded with what you can call 'ye olde' language. Very good story, on the whole.