This was perfect. Very nice.

I love seeing these characters. Surprised they didn't toss Kavanagh out to the Wraith.

Nice scene. It fits all the characters, and you even manage to let Kavanagh be human, which is not easy. Found this looking for Zelenka fic, and very glad I did.

Sounding good so far! I like that you chose to focus on some of the more side characters! Makes it fun. Please write more, this sounds interesting. :)

i really like your story keep writing more.