|Reviews for Unwind the Time|
| FlightfootKeyseeker chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
I liked this story, but it had a major flaw. Liam's death didn't seem real or immediate. It seemed more like something that Mr. Lassiter was imagining than something that was actually happening. After he fell, she just quietly went inside instead of telling everyone what had just happened to her son. It would have made more sense if this had been her thinking about Liam's death and Conner's unwinding both in retrospect, instead of having Liam die during the story.
| HarryPotterFan02 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
I found the formatting hard to read and pay attention too. Sorry