|Reviews for The New Professor|
| SilverLunaMoon chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
Haha X) Suck to be Malfoy there :P Nice chapter
| SafetyScissors chapter 5 . 10/23/2011
damn, your bribing us now.
Unfortunaltely, I like this story...a lot. grr.
add this too your twenty reviews *sighs*
| Sora Moto chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
This always makes me chuckle. These little snippets are entertaining and well written. Keep up the good work.
| o0SoulGuardian0o chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
I apparently was reading chapter 4, thinking that it was the last chapter updated, then poof! It was like, magic! Great story, can maybe Alfred give a suprise visit to England? And then America's all like, "Ha! Magic, what a dumb thing!" and then nobody could see he dragged along Canada (except Hermione who visited Canada when she was 5).
...just a suggestion. Thanks!
| meme12345bunny chapter 5 . 10/22/2011
| Fresa 021 chapter 4 . 10/21/2011
Guau, that're really fast updates. It's true that the capthers are short, but I thrink is a good start. You made me thrink about England and his preference for Slythrin, it's because of Scottland? I thought in Alfred but I don't thrink he knows about magic. And then I realised, hey, Scot may be a Griffindor, and then, Gales may be a Ravenclaw and the Ireland brothers (or only Ireland, I dont know well) may be of Hufflepuff. ummm... ideas,ideas.(sorry, English is not my mother language) Good Luck
| F is for Freedom chapter 4 . 10/21/2011
So he's a Slytherin... I've always thought he was a Ravenclaw, but that fits him well too. But does Artie really have to be sour over Gryffindor? I bet it's probably a certain blue-eyed freedom-and-hamburger-loving rebelious-former-colony, or is that just me? (- my patriotism sucks. :P GO ALFRED! even if you aren't in the story! yet...)
Anyways, sorry for the random comment. Nice chapter... though it's really on the short side. May I ask that you write your chapters a bit longer? Although it's cool that you update almost daily. Big plus in my book. I await your next update. Until then, CIAO!
| Draconis Darkess chapter 4 . 10/20/2011
That I did not see coming. Arthur a slytherin fan! Never would of thought it. Though he fits the bill. Never mind that him having doubts about Harry once more a turn I didn't see coming. I am however particulary interested however to why Arthur dislikes Gryfindor and favors Slytherin.
| meme12345bunny chapter 4 . 10/20/2011
| SafetyScissors chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
It's really good so far, but sooo short! I think most of us readers would be a lot happier if you wrote like 10 chapters, and then combined them all.
You have more reviews then you have words!
| reader chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
Wow! Compared to other authors, you update really fast! But, the chapters are really, really small (seriously). It can be distracting (and to some readers- anoying) for the reader to have to press the "next chapter" button every (like) 8 lines... Also, a recommendation- you habe some really good diologe and character actions, but not much setting. For example- in this latest chapter the reader has no idea where this conversation is taking place until "professer" Kirland says for them to take their seats, and even then its not very desciptive. Another thing you could add is a sense of time. For instance- when you left off on ch 2 Harry and co. were in some hallway or the Great Hall (I'm not exactly sure...) and then in this chapter they're suddenly elsewhere? It doesn't add up very well... try adding a time-skip notice or attempt to add a section where the characters are walking/changing location. It helps with the fluency of the story.
| Sharrkolla chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
Great story, but I wish your updates were longer, but otherwise I really like it, update soon!
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
A little short for my tastes, but the content was most excellent.
Please continue, stories like these are either not in supply or badly written, yours is neither.
Good luck with the next chapters.
| georgster101 chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
| IGGY demon sis chapter 3 . 10/20/2011