|Reviews for The First Guardian|
| Mundy16 chapter 12 . 6/14
Great story :)
| avidreader-everafter chapter 12 . 1/24
so, you still alive? if so I hope all is well and that one day you come back to this story, because I really enjoyed reading it so far
| stephen51991 chapter 12 . 1/12
...Shit, I just realized that this hasn't been updated in almost six years.
| HummingBird742 chapter 12 . 12/30/2017
Thank you for that inspirational message.
| Scififan33 chapter 12 . 12/20/2017
I love this! A,axing to see how ,Ichigo changes all because Ichigo learns so David there wouldn’t be a long break in the notes of this chapter and yet that was 5years ago. Does this mean it’s abandoned? I really hope not!
| Squarekiddo chapter 2 . 12/15/2017
The only thing I hate more then "Rightous dumbass, one sighted heroes" are when theres a plot device to string the viewer along by not telling the viewer what should obviously be in a dialogue.
Minus points by the way by following canon like this when canon shouldnt even be in play anymore, going so far as to make him miscount the enemies in a fight so he cant get injured just to fit canon by having him "weak" during canon start, just like canon.
Seriously... Miscounting in a fight, dont know what went through your head there mate, its completely illogical.
| YokaiAngel chapter 12 . 11/26/2017
| IpiuGate chapter 12 . 10/5/2017
Banter overload. I'm even ignoring the OP bullshit you're trying to pull with Ichigo and Zangetsu because the potential for humour and innuendo is limitless between them. Congratulations.
| Azarak Azrael chapter 12 . 9/15/2017
I just wanna say that this fanfic is my all time favorite Bleach fanfic and I know that you probably get this a lot but please update the masterful work that is The First Guardian.
| Kyuubi-dono chapter 12 . 9/13/2017
How... Lovely of you... Haha. This was actually really awesome. Some grammar mistakes, but nothing too horrible. I hope you do update this eventually. This is a really cool story, even if I don't usually ship IchiRuki (what with Rikia being several hundreds of years older than Ichigo at any point in time that he is still living). Update when you can. I haven't lost faith lol.
| Annoy mouse chapter 1 . 7/7/2017
Interesting premise. Not sure about kido destroying souls, though. Wouldn't the Shinigami use spells that could purify?
| Nihatclodra chapter 12 . 6/27/2017
Hell of a place to abandon this fic on...
| Kidzin chapter 12 . 5/27/2017
Please, please, PLEASE come back man! This story is absolutely bonkers twist on source material, incredible humour and inside jokes. You original story is so engaging. God it's been 5 years and there was no word from you. It would be such a shame if you just abandone it!;(
| Arowen12 chapter 10 . 4/25/2017
Excellent story love the humour!
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 12 . 4/17/2017
Interesting story pls update soon