|Reviews for Feral Child|
| IMixDangerousChemicals chapter 1 . 9/16/2013
Awwwwww this was so fricking cute! I love this. This made my day, amazing job!
| Clockwork Silver chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Ok, I loved it. I do love Sasuke of course but I really think your characterisation was so well done
| breakfast111 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
I like the idea of this story. Mikoto is a great mother. I like her in the story, but I really dislike Itachi in it for he just judged his brother from his appearance who is different from the one in my heart. Itachi is more like a person who will love his little brother despite his look.
Although I like the story, I feel pity for the ending. It makes me a bit little awful… Sasuke is too pathetic…TT
Anyhow thank you for the story.
P.S. Sorry for my poor English … Hope that it won't cause puzzle to you… thanks anyhow
| Crystallinee chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
This is so sad, but wonderfully written! I love it! But it made me really sad that it ended just when Itachi told Sasuke he loved him. Is it possible to have some more, pretty pretty please? This was wonderful.
| susannahblack19 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
That's stupid he didn't like him all those years he looked like a monster but wasn't but when he looks a normal human being but is still himself in the inside they all suddenly love him? Stupid idiotic judgemental prejudiced bastards!
| Pecha Pichu chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
so sad, *wipes tear away*
I've read this story at least 5 times over and over again and I can't believe I forgot to review!
Really loved the Mikoto x Sasuke interaction, and the Fugaku x Sasuke somewhat too, because they both were really canon. Though Itachi seemed completely changed - why did his attitude to Sasuke change so drastically in 3 years? Before that, he was ashamed to know him, and after not seeing him for years, suddenly wants to get to know him; especially since he was a young adult, not a teenager wanting to talk to his younger brother.
| TigerInTheMoonlight chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
That...was amazing. I can't even think of what to say. Just...wow. Bravo. I love it
| i-don't-need-a-name chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
woah, this was probably the best Naruto one shot i've ever read, thank you so much for having the weird but absolutely awesome idea for this fic! :)
at first i thought the story was boring since i'm a pervert and love to read smexy Uchihacest but this was so so good that it doesn't even matter.
much love for you 3
and since i'm lazy, i'll tell you here that "Divinity" is great too :3
| SinAngelic chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
You had me tearing up badly! Such a well written story with emotion that felt real raw. It was great and I felt like I could really connect somewhat with the characters feelings. I was bawling for Sasuke... Continue to write more stories please :D
| je.me.souviendrai.tjs chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Even if it sorta ended well, I still find this story very sad. I mean, being cast as a monster for 18 years is horrible. I simply cannot imagine how horrible Sasuke could have feel during that time.
Still , it was very interesting to see the evolution of Sasuke's behavior around people. Especially when he was little and start to understand that people are well, let's be honest here, monsters.
I think that Sasuke forgave Itachi too easily. I know that Itachi tried to reconnect with him for 2 years, but even so, such a trahiso like this one, cannot go away. Scars will remain forever. Oh and dont't get me start with Fugaku... You wouldn't hear the end of it!
All this to say, that this oneshot was awesome. It was my first time reading a story as this one. It was dark, deep, sad and simply wonderfull.
I wish you good luck with your next projects xD
| Mad As A Bloody Hatter chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
oh my god this made me tear up at certain points
| yamiatemyugi chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
WOW This is my first time reading Itachi and Sasuke fanfic and I really loved the story! You really described each character well and pretty close to the original (except Madara but I don't mind British Madara LOL). The story was cute and made me smile at the end. Itachi and Sasuke brotherly love was awesome.
There were some bits that was left unsaid for other characters like Naruto but I guess the main focus is in Itach and Sasuke
I really liked the story! Keep it up!:)
| Zena007 chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Of all your ficcys that you have going so far, this one is the most interesting, by far. And the best written. Mind you, there is still room for improvement, but the idea is definitely original, which is certainly good to see.
I thoroughly enjoyed how you portrayed Mikoto; in my opinion, in character all the way. We don't see much of her in the anime/manga, but there is no doubt in my mind that she was a caring, but lonely, mother, whom only longed to have a child to bathe her motherly warmth in, just as you wrote about.
I also loved reading about how Itachi and Sasuke were born - both had very unique days (weather) when they came into this world, that's for sure Every nuance when they were younger, no matter, necessarily, the author, always intrigues me, which is how I came to read this story in the first place. It opened with Mikoto wishing for children and I could hardly wait to read just how much her bundles of joy would affect her and how they would grow to be the ages we mainly/normally seem them as.
All in all, it was an interesting read; keep up the great work!
| GaaraHinataWake chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
This was great, I loved this story. I don't know what to say, but I thought at least I could try to put something on here. I'm not very good with writing long reviews but I wish I could, because this story deserves one. So here is my shot at it.
I loved it from beginning to end. I absolutly adore Mikoto, she was exactly as I pictured her in my mind and that is a loving caring mother, that would accept her children no matter what they might look like. I'm glad that Itachi finally came around to realizing that Sasuke wasn't really that bad. I wish that Naruto would have been mentioned a couple of more times, because you did say that Sasuke befriended him, but you kind of left it like that. Was Naruto worried when Sasuke quit comeing to school or did he just role with it. I know that this story is mostly focused on the family but I don't think that would hurt the story one bit.
Anyway I think that was all I had to say, I love your writing and as always happy writings. :D
| Nimbafuu chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
Oh, I feel so bad for Sasuke. It's written wonderfully, so perfect I nearly cried twice! This is simply a fantastic story! It has a unique plot, and your detail is just wonderful! It does feel like it should have a sequel, but the story is amazing on it's own. Whether or not you write more to this, it's amazing!