Reviews for The Burdened Deathcake
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 25 . 5/2
It's truly sad that you let off at this point. You have great potential and you put so much effort into this endeavor. Know this: you are still one of my few favorite authors!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 24 . 5/2
1) We have officially to the best point in the story! 2) I am SO wanting to see Naruto experience the love he should reciprocate from his ladies. However, I also think that two more ladies should fall for him. Specifically, Orihime and Yoruichi. Just sayin'...
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 23 . 5/2
Whoa, Nelly! Heartbreak and insane suicidal rescue plans, away!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 22 . 5/2
1) I truly want to see Naruto and Ayame be rogether so much now! It's so sad to watch them struggle with relationship. I wonder how Rangiku will help bring them together at last? Speaking of whom: 2) Soul Society shows up now?!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 21 . 5/2
Man, wow! One word - EPIC!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 20 . 5/2
To say the least, this is getting more and more intriguing. I hope it doesn't come to too much much of an abrupt end.
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 19 . 5/2
This is getting... hectic.
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 18 . 5/2
Oh, Ayame...
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 16 . 5/1
Well, how about them apples! Naruto's kind heart winning 'em o'er once more!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 15 . 5/1
1) Now I'm wondering how Mikoto will feel after learning the truth straight from Naruto. 2) FemKyūbi who is psycho but will eventually grow to love Naruto, am I right? How... creepy.
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 14 . 5/1
1) Wonderful, lovely blossoming of Naruto and Rangiku's relationship as it should be! 2) Oh boy! How are Ayame and Anko gonna take this? 3) Can't wait to see Naruto's awesome abilities unfold!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 11 . 5/1
As wild and outlandish as it was, that was quite a twist!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 10 . 5/1
Oh dear...
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 8 . 5/1
1) Now I want Shiroi to make a return! 2) Strange... yet nice development for Naruto and Rangiku. 3) Of course, Anko time!
AnonymousCritic212 chapter 7 . 5/1
That was SO touching on so many levels... and I SO saw that ending scene coming! It was wonderful!
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