|Reviews for Oneshots|
| Nameless Namer chapter 3 . 7/31
I don't see anything wrong about this. You had a fun experience that you passed on to your writing. I like it! I've never been to either of those and don't know what bendy obstacle you are referring to but it seems fun especially with terrible slide burns that make you want to just rip that piece of skin off. You're second person isn't too bad either, better than mine for sure.
Actually, I forget if this is even called 2nd person.
| Nameless Namer chapter 2 . 7/31
I mean since you said please so many times and I have to pratice criticing people anyway...
I actually like this story and how it moved from one point to the next (especially how he differentiated between Dash and Danny) but I doubt Lancer would have people pick sides on the topic of bullying...then again you already explained that Lancer just wanted to find something to relate to the students. However, near the end when you had everyone but Dash joined the anti-bully side (which I doubt most of the popular people would do anyway) to show Dash was in fact a bully you singled him out and then punished him for it which is bullying (not the punishment the singling out THEN public humiliation via detention) especially after you said 'No one deserves being picked on and ridiculed'.
And back to personal biased opinion, I agree with Kwan the most in the fact that everyone can be a bully but I don't fully agree with the bullies shouldn't be punished. I like how you gave me some internal debate about bullying. Thanks for writing!
| Chimaerakitten chapter 2 . 7/16
only thing i can think of is that the pro bullying side was a bit too transparent rather than lancer saying "side who think bullying shouldn't be punished" he could have said "side who think bullying is just a part of growing up". other than that, a great one-shot- I love these.
| Nameless Namer chapter 7 . 2/1
Aww how fluffy and cute
| Nameless Namer chapter 5 . 2/1
Dash orrrrrr Vlad maybe
| Nameless Namer chapter 4 . 2/1
Hmm Valerie I think
| Specter14 chapter 22 . 11/9/2015
xD ULTIMATE FAIL
Poor Dan...ny xD
| Sam Howler chapter 7 . 1/16/2015
Woah, Sam's just staring at him, then... big reveal. Nice job.
| Pineapple Phone chapter 15 . 10/23/2014
I see what you did there. Harry potter reference...
| DragonsAddicted chapter 20 . 7/5/2014
| DragonsAddicted chapter 14 . 7/5/2014
I wish I had subs like that!
And awesome posters like that too!
| DragonsAddicted chapter 13 . 7/5/2014
| DragonsAddicted chapter 10 . 7/5/2014
Did I mention I was a Whovian? I don't think. I did.
| DragonsAddicted chapter 7 . 7/5/2014
DANNY (finally) ADMITTED IT!
| DragonsAddicted chapter 5 . 7/5/2014
3. No! 4! Guesses...
Dash (unlikely, he does not have a sick face)
Dan Phantom (less unlikely)
Vlad Plasmius (again, unlikely. Because he wants to convert Danny.)
Or... *Suspense drums*
Walker! (Or the sheriff guy)