Reviews for Convergence
Burachi chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
Beautiful. I love how you write each character so in canon, these are things that they would definitely say. Wow.
I think the saddest part is that Amy knowns Melody will not have all these experiences (caring of, loved, school, date..) because she known Melody become River.
Sylva Dax chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Somehow the introduction of Mels into this was a bit off for me. I don't think she would have been told about River. It doesn't fit LKH.

Also, the exchange between River and her shell-shocked parents was rushed and was emotionally unsatisfying. It started off well but fizzled.
Pilcrow chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
Aw, this is really lovely.
Vilinye chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Oh, yes you are, Mels. Indeed you are
Gaialy chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
River would of course know not to come back right away, because she is there...it does get complicated being a time-lord
MelodyCurious chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
I love stories that read like an episode, and this was a perfect one! You have Rory down to a tee, and it left me aching for poor Amy. To have just discovered your pregnant and to loose the child... *hugs*