|Reviews for Equilibrium|
| Stark-San chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
This was very well executed, overall. I like the flow of the narrative, and the complicated relationship between Jigen and 'Lupin' is very nicely done.
Poor Yasuo. He didn't know how much he bit off when he made the decision that he did. Am I wrong for liking his character so much? Great job!
-Stark (yes, THAT Stark. :3)
| BlackCatRunning chapter 1 . 10/17/2011
THIS WAS AWESOME. I need to watch the movie, so I will understand more of it, but so far, it's GREAT. The pacing is so perfect, and I love how you wait to introduce Lupin at the very end _. Epic dialogue xD. Can't wait for more!