Reviews for De Ja Vou
nertooold54 chapter 11 . 5/11/2012
Cute ending. Many of us have lovely fantasies of being protected by Booth.
nertooold54 chapter 9 . 12/10/2011
I just read all 9 chapters; I'd describe the story as campy fun. Hannah is totally losing it.
PrintDust chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Mirroring your personality onto a character is literally the definition of a Mary sue. And no one likes a Mary Sue. I suggest, if you would like people to appreciate your work, spend some time observing the character and how other people write her. At the very least remove that from your summary. It's makes the story seem appealing.
ArthursCamelot chapter 6 . 11/1/2011
I do love a broody, angry Booth...though I do believe I like a broody, angry Angel more...must be the fangs...lol

Lots of love,

AC
ArthursCamelot chapter 3 . 10/22/2011
It's cute! The disclaimers are fantabulous! Love them!

On a writing note, little tidbit of advice, I would try and work a little bit more description into your writing. The dialogue is great, and because I know the characters and their expressions so well, I can see it all play out in my head. But just from a literary standpoint, I'd add a little more description. :D

Love how you made Hannah the baddie! I hope you slap her and then toss her butt in a jail cell!

Keep writing! :D

-AC